i just dont know where the story is going so i cant give it a high mark i do however encourage the author to keep going and to refine their skills

Absolutely loved it! Sollivan is such a patient and well-crafted protagonist, with promising potential for story development. I felt the story is bit draggy at first but the plot picked up pace and blended beautifully. Do consider keeping the chapters a bit shorter to maintain momentum.Keep going🥰

An Honest review here.(Spoiler alert)Currently at chapter 86.This novel started out fairly good, but then start shaping up pretty mediocre.Firstly there’s no background build up. The MC seem to be in different universe but yet earth still exist, while he is on a different planet no advance tech or inter planet travel is even mention. Even Gods exist in this world.Yet MC is in an academy training to be assassin ?The MC doesn’t have any memory(most likely to add mystery to the novel)  but retrieved a lil back which makes him able to fight.He was better without his memories as he was more of an assassin now he is like a try to prove everyone his the best. & became arrogant.The Tag academy should’ve been added cause it’s clearly just a novel Thats focus on academy daily life as far as I read.Have no idea how old the MC Is but given his in an academy his probably young? Yet he is a wanted world criminal ? And he is to save the universe?  While the writing is averagely decent, the story, mystery and world building could’ve been way better and has way more potential to be BEtter but author lacks imagination or creativity.I will give this novel a 2/5.

My Caligula looked so handsome on my new novel cover! Thats why i can understand why Lepidus is smitten. Crushing hard for 3 years OMG! Lepidus is equally handsome too tho. i have a picture of him somewhere!! oh here it is!!! hehe come on fujoshis!!! read and let's cheer for Lepidus!!!

Just don't elongate some things too much.And make some plots more believable.

well i hope its a good book since im the one who wrote it for those who are reading the book i hope you like it and if you have and recommendations please tell methere is a discord for the book in my bio i will be able to respond on comments there more often i will be uploading episodes when i have more of them built up to starting from today on thank you for reading my book

the story is pretty good, definitely a good read when bored or wanting to read a Yuri novel. Though I noticed that 49 and below chapters seemed to disappear?

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐I love the suspense and the depth of the characters. The well's secrets are slowly unraveling, and I’m eager to see where it leads. Highly recommended!

Normally don’t do these, but this is a good one. I’m liking the story so far I saw there was no review so I thought I’d give you one. Keep up the good work.

After 13 chapters, the characters begin behaving and speaking in extremely unexpected ways, talking about events that never happened while also forgetting events that did happen. I'm almost certain that the author has two different versions of the same novel, with critical differences in the events of the plot between the two, and has mistakenly mixed up chapters of the two together. The story was going well at first, although the chemistry between the two main characters was lacking. But I initially dismissed it as just awkward writing. But after reading the 14th and 15th chapter, nothing made sense anymore and the attraction between the two felt more forced than ever. On the bright side, the way the author narrates the environment, the mood, and the thoughts and feelings of the characters is extremely good. I just hope that whatever made the characters begin behaving oddly and speaking in very self-contradictory ways gets resolved. The fact that nearly everything that happened during the first chapters is contradicted in a single dialogue in the 14th chapter leads me to believe that a huge mixup must have happened. The inconsistency is hard to overlook. I truly was enjoying the story but it just took such a sudden nosedive that I can't justify continuing to read it. Good luck, author.

WHAT THE HECK?I started reading this book. (LOVING IT !🫶) I was reading along, finished the last i4lpublished chapter shortly after it was published, and waited anxiously for the next & waiting & waiting & waiting..........and after a month, still nothing. NOTHING BUGS ME MORE than a great story being left, just hanging  like this. I can understand  if it writers block or something, but instead of posting a story & write it as you go, why not just write a chunk of it in advance or the whole thing 🤔 before posting? so that you don't leave fans waiting like this. If I don't see updates soon, I will remove from my library.I hope Author that you are able to start posting more chapters soon. Your a Great Writer and this story is really interesting with great characters with a great setting. please keep up the amazing writing.

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