11 Years Apart

This is shockingly good..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

This book reminds me of the old cultivation novels... It's nice.There aren't many bad points in the novel. The grammar and punctuation are both decent. Proper spacing and sentence structuring. My only issue with it is that it feels a bit rushed. The chapter lengths are good in my own opinion  but it just feels a bit rushed. Dialogue isn't a lot, and feel stiff as well...Altogether it is very good, but would be even better if these issues addressed...

not bad at all. will definitely be looking forward to more from the author.

Ah, so far, the book is alright; the writing is fine, the story is developing, but slowly, the character designs are alright, and the main character is just a normal smart boy with potential (who knows, maybe he'll get better later). It is advised for readers with a lot of patience, but even though it seems unexceptional, this book has a lot of potential if there is character development.

Haven't read the book but the cover is super good 👍

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"But it will make her weak," Kriz protests.

After completing our chant, the voice in the shadow said in a mocking voice "Such a childish behaviour!" before laughing and at the same time started clapping his hands slowly.