Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

I'm still on Chapter 10. But I saw the author's announcement, so decided to write a review so we can have more chapters because I'm afraid of getting cliffhanged! Fighting!

Hello , writer here , I will publish roughly on chpt a day , if you have any comment or suggestions pls do it , the more comment are on my chapters the happier I am, and pls stone me

Hey there guys this is the author here. My first time trying something like this, I know there will be a lot of mistakes which I will correct but I am promising yall a good ride.

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Hard to read at first but it grows out of it and becomes a really good read. It’s funny at times and the dynamic between shameless master and normal disciple seems entertaining. This is a really solid story and all-in-all I really hope it will get picked.

Honestly, I thought this book would be more of a mystery, but it turned out to be a great start. The journey has yet to truly begin!

If only I could give 10 stars for writing quality. I love how the book is described, I imagine so many different scenes as I read. Killing someone just to get a man is diabolical and her hope that woman gets her white stained and dies too tsk tsk. I’m rooting for this book! And I know it’s going to be an amazing read.❤️

Too early for a review but that writing is off the chart and world seems very unique with the topping of sea essence

This story is truly amazing and has great potential.Each chapter makes you seeking more and really is a must to read.I won't get into detail, but you should read a few chapters and judge it yourself.

This book cured my Depressive state by transporting me to a fantasy world where such novelties don’t exist. All in all a great book, even better author!

Pretty decent read, pace is a bit fast but ok.Main weakness is character development, all of the love interrest are kinda bland and all the same to the point that its hard to tell them from one another, and they fall for the MC straight away basically all at once.The building up is nice although a bit simplistic.MC is smart and not OP, story and world is coherent so its a big pkus.overall its a decent read