Greetings of the Universe

Don’t waste your time reading this. It starts off really good and then just plummets… It ends so fast that you know it ended but you are still so confused.

Honestly, although better than most of the garbage junk on this site it’s just a TBATE clone. It has the potential to actually be more and interesting but the author forces so many plots just to keep the same storyline as in TBATE. I mean here we have a reborn 18 year old that has never known familial love but runs off first thing to go train with dragons for years leaving his parents to think him dead. He comes back only to leave them after what 2 weeks to become an adventurer at like 7. Yeah okay makes sense for parents to finally get their son back and allow him a 7 year old to go off on adventures. Another thing is the “bind” honestly a terrible name that’s just awkward when magic could’ve worked because as said he came from Eath where magic and mana or essence or elemental anything could’ve worked but no we have bind and binders. Just doesn’t work other than wanting to be different from the otherwise same story TBATE. Early on we get informed that the average age of someone awakening is around 12 and our main character awoke at 3 you’d think this would give him an advantage but no not really everyone and their mother seems to be a 8 year old fully awakened genius that is close to being on par with our 18 year old combat veteran. Another thing I have to point out is the switching between pov’s because it doesn’t add anything to the story other than tooting the MC’s horn and saying how different he is from the other boys and how great he is. There is little to no development for the side characters other than being there to support the mc. But like I said it’s better than most novels on the site and the only reason I’m being harsh is because the author has potential it just makes me mad to see a possibly good novel turn bad because it’s trying to follow another story.

Hi Guys, Author here.🙂I never would've imagined myself writing a romance novel or any type of genre if it was not for a dear friend who told me that I have a knack for this.. so I tried. Thank you for all of your Support.

author is this dropped? pls dont tell me it is

"You seemed to have found someone truly interesting-er, Little Arata."

Suddenly her hand caught my forearm, causing my jaw to clench in pain. She spun me around and slammed me into the wall, her hand on my throat. She began to apply a dangerous amount of pressure and the glass slipped from my hand and shattered on the floor.

Waking up the next morning was like a breath of fresh air. My body feels refreshed and warm. I don't see the doctor anywhere, so I grab my new clothes and step outside. There were several soldiers moving around but no one was in a hurry. I didn't what to do so I walked towards the general's tent. The soldiers smile and greet me as I walk then I soon reach my destination. I pull back the flap and walk in and see the general and some other men talking.

He glanced up expecting to see an NPC, only to see a very familiar face. "Big sis?" He asked hesitantly.