Hi l liked the novel but here are some suggestions for a new novel or your current novel

I love the story so far, it has given me a lot of inspiration and I find myself hard pressed to not create something similar with a father and his kids creating a ragtag team of adventurers. Loving Frank, with all of his faults, he is a good dad. There's a lot of action and intense moments that keep you reading. The stats aren't overdone which is nice for a litrpg. The stats are important, of course, but it's like not like every chapter bombards you with a bunch of text to read. The side characters are pretty solid too, they feel like actual people instead of just background noise. Everyone has their own struggles and unique personalities. There's a couple slow points, but it's an important part of the story, the character building is vital. The world building is pretty strong, I honestly expected it to just be another "transported to another world" kind of thing. It's giving some serious survival/horror/litrpg vibes. Honestly worth the read. I didn't have any specific reasons to give a score below 5 stars. It might be generous, but I mean the quality is great, the frequency of updates are solid, the development has no issues by my standards, the characters are wonderful, and the world background was more than I expected. So I don't think it's too much to give it a solid 5 stars. Keep up the good work, I'll save this for reading, and maybe jump into a couple chapters as they are released. My time is limited, but this is one thing that is worth budgeting for.

niceee love this story , really rooting for Keshav and Lilian😂🥰♥️♥️

Beautiful story, it is very interesting and captivating. Highly recommended 👌

An absolutely captivating story with well-developed characters and a plot that keeps you hooked from start to finish. The author’s writing style brings the world to life, making every chapter a delight to read. Highly recommended for anyone looking for an immersive and unforgettable experience!

Keep it going, man. It's a great start. It's an awesome story with a nice world background. I like your idea & story concept. Wish to read more so keep going!!!

i read up to chapter 99.For me this is good.I love how the author wrote the story.Well certain dialogue feel abit arkward.But overall is acceptable.Anyway,keep up the good work author.Make this story entertain more in the future.Just like how you do on your other story.

Shameless author review:Just in case you’re not sure if this is the book for you, here are a few more details:1. This is primarily a romance, but there’s also lots of worldbuilding and fantastical things happening.2. This book is not a harem, and there is no love triangle.3. This is a slow burn (emphasys on slow) where the MCs get to know each other first before the romance starts. 4. There will (eventually) be a bit of smut, but nothing too crazy. 5. The main MC, Perry, does make a lot of questionable choices in the beginning of the story, and it takes him a while to understand everything. But that doesn’t mean he’s a pushover and lets people walk all over him. He’s good at improvising and figuring things out as he goes.6. Even though there is lots of worldbuilding, the main driving force of this story are the characters and how the challenges they face change them - and how that then changes the world. 7. Expect this story to be long (minimum of 500 chapters) because I have big plans for my beloved characters. 8. Oh, and it’s gay. Very, very gay. That being said, I hope you give my chaotic lovelies a chance and enjoy reading their story! 🤪

A good start to a good story. I would like to see more of this story. I would like to see a harem. I think that it would be a good idea. I really like the fact that it has a orc main character.

i like it  reading novels is really way hard for me and i can't get past to it because it's too long and some of it was already finished and i having a hard time keeping up to read the story and I suddenly see this novel just now  and after a couple of minutes i got hook from reading it regardless the story is quite interesting i might continue reading this novel

I LOVE THE CREATIVITY OF THIS BOOK. THIS WRITER IS OUTSTANDING 🩷

I Love love love love love love love love love love love love this novel. You should read it, especially if you love beast taming novels.