Am loving this novel so much. its a great truly can't wait to read more chapters it's getting interesting and i love Lucian and nate friendship❤️🥰 keep up the good work author 👍

Nah bro what is this story, I read one chapter and I couldn't do it no more cuh, the writing is good but I ain't reading something ive seen done a bazillon times over 😴

It's a bit too early for the novel, but i think this has potential. It's slow start with child mc with 27 year old mind. so expect usual pervert tropes similar to MT. Mc is a child so dont expect any smut from this novel for a long time which also assumes the fact that this novel would go on and not be dropped like hundreds of others wsa entry novels every year.I expect this to be pretty much a pokemon collection type of story because of how his system functions. so fair warning about that.Lore seems like something you would expect from high scale fantasy story but i with how things are progressing, i think most of the story will not have universe shattering stuff rather i expect jojo or jjk style fights.I am not much of a fan of kingdom building trops which is hinted to be one of the key factor of the story due to overlord of humanity ending requirements but hopefully it wont be sht.Also side note, these Lore abilities which mc gets are really whack ti say the least.

i really inspired by thought he is world where gender is imbalance but damn futa blow my mind all the good description and elaborate detail of place has thrown well this is definitely not for me

This is a good book. Such a good start for a new book, good one author.

This is my WSA 2025 Entry! Expect much higher quality. You can use this review to ask me questions as well.Read the 'READ THIS BEFORE STARTING' chapter; it would mean a lot.Anyhow, even if you don't, I'll still post the main thing here:100 Golden tickets = 1 Extra Chapter | Limit = 4 Per Week (400 Golden Tickets)200 Power Stones = 1 Extra Chapter | Limit = 3 Per Week (600 Power Stones)The way this would work is, every single monday, I would release the extra chapters in accordance with the goals reached. EVERY WEBNOVEL MONDAY RESET. (0:00 GMT+8)If all goals are broken each week, you will have a 7-chapter mass release every single Monday.If the weekly mass release goals are broken continuously, I will adjust the goals accordingly. If the book becomes very popular, I might even increase the limit.All of this would be taken into effect once this book gets contracted.Happy reading!

ummm...I think you need to put the quotation marks at the dialogue to make it become clearer, and also...try to make the story a show rather then a tell, if you can... but overall, it's the writing the problem, if you managed to correct it, then it will be improved.

So guys please leave a comment on what you think of the novel and if this is a novel that you will support. and know that this is a test to see if this type of story and Mc is wanted or not if not I will find another project to write I have a couple but this is the one I decided to test first.

Interesting read but there are a number of chapters missing around chapter 25 or so. One minute the MC is the forest and the next he is in a city completing a quest with some new female.I also notice it is on hold for now, so I’m guessing the author has perhaps abandoned it and not fixed anything.Still it started to look good then faded out to mediocrity with no responses from the author.

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This is a great story. I can't stop my self giving it a five star reviewQuite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed....

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