Veilfall

great read need more chapters................................................................................................................

Hurray! I thought this story would be liked that of a horror movie, at the beginning I was very hesitant because it's my first time reading stories like this. I was only curious but as I go along reading it, I started  liking the story. Thanks author.

This book is very good at starting, and here is what I mean. We first see that this guy is looking through something to find a cure for himself. Then, the book introduces who he is and how he got that point. It's a way to start the story without having to tell the background first.

The best thing from this novel is the hilarious narration. Author does it so well that the writing and pace managed to pull me in the world. Everything seems vivid then. Everything is happening. And my stomach is still sore from all that laughing .The second best thing, woman.

Wow when you die and the woman you love is reincarnated and gives birth to you.. Dang man thats freaking crazy. I think the character building and the friendships in this book is great so far but im only currently at Chalter 130.

This story seems really god the man character is interesting (although did you mean for him to seem so sociopathic in the early chapters? I mean he says hes okay with being an npc because he was getting bored) but more than that, please god run the early chapters through grammerly or a read-to-text or something cause this story is great but my god i actually can’t understand what you mean in some of the paragraphs without like 10 careful rereads

The game is so broken that his skills at the start is so OP. Especially he has a cheat everything will be so broken already even if he's just a beginner.

So I mean. I finished volume 1. I have very mixed feelings about this. The world, story, development, mystery are all superb. The writing quality is excellent. The update frequency is rather low but I’m just glad they are still going. Now for the negatives. It seems that every single person the MC becomes invested in emotionally or physically romantic or not just gets shipped off somewhere or dies. The first two women he liked they just moved and ghosted. The second romantic encounter he develops a strong bond and feelings with the woman for her to die in his arms. I guess I’d just like maybe one(?) partner who’s and excellently written character to not be killed off as soon as they are fully fleshed out? It’s just a downer and makes me not want to keep going because they made such interesting characters, and it would feel like a replacement or copy to have someone with a similar personality or way of talking. I’ll keep going for the 2nd volume and hope it gets better in that regard because I truly do like the story and will update my thoughts at that point here. Thank you author hope you’re well.