Can you please tell that in which ch of book 1 was the icecream scene where keifer was seen clicking jay jay which was seen on ep 11

Well, this is an author here shamelessly reviewing and voting his own book. This right here might turn out to be the biggest book ever written on this platform. You should watch out!If you don't believe, then read for yourself. We might get a movie endorsement on this one lol.Happy reading!!Will be back when this book blows and become famous :)

erm.. I like the detail so imaging this in my head is so peak ^O^!! I luv the artwork tew ts so hard !! it was long but worth reading :3!! PUH LEASE make more twin!!

Hi, everyone! Author here shamelessly rating our book 5 stars!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟Why? Because I love this story and I poured my heart into it!If you’re looking for a novel with high-stakes survival, psychological warfare (coz I love those) and plot twists that will make you question your sanity, then this book is for you!So, what are you waiting for? Join the game now! And don’t forget to leave a review so I know you’re suffering — I mean enjoying the ride😉- A totally humble, absolutely unbiased, definitely-not-desperate author🫶

An honest review from a fellow author.The Word building in the first ten chapters is enough to give the novel a solid foundation as they include ample clues about the setting being based around Roman mythology and martial cultivation with a strong revenge theme laying the groundwork for a villainous MC's rise to power.Evidence suggests that you're writing in Russian and translating to English either personality or with AI assistance. Part of chapter 4 is in Russian, and the mother's name switched languages once or twice. Careful with using AI tools, could affect contract considerations.Still rather readable overall. Translator for Super  Gene 2 can't even keep genders straight.The premise is solid and I look forward to seeing where you take the story and how you flesh in the cultivation system as you mix Roman mythos with Chinese cultivation elements.+1 on the cat girl maid. The descriptions are good but could be a little less wordy at times. Paragraph length and spacing could use improvements. (To fit better with WN/LN style and platform) Ie. Mobile friendly.As that is how most readers access the platform.  Still not that bad as is.

The story starts with a simple premise - mass awakening of monsters throughout the world, and MC is a sort of 'chosen one' with a daughter in tow. So far there's less focus on magic and skills than other stories but the system elements are abundantly present in each chapter, serving as a continuous reminder of MC's growth. It's too early (review is as of ch10) to comment much on the character development, but there are a few established characters and MC's relationship with his daughter remains criticial to the plot. I'm interested to see where this goes!Definitely give it a shot if you're a fan of robust system novels.

Only two chapters in so far, and I'm stoked! Ryha has done such a great job providing vivid descriptions and with immersion, really pulling me into the world that's told through an interesting perspective!No complaints here!

Liking it....more updates please... waiting

I just finished reading it, and I'm genuinely captivated by the storyline. The twists and developments have piqued my curiosity, and I find myself eagerly anticipating how everything will unfold. I'm really looking forward to the upcoming updates

Should I say Olivia was unlucky in the first few chapters, also betrayed by Alessia whom she had actually beaconed on. However when she met Ace, her life took a drastic turn. Violence, anger, his cheer dominance in her life. She became a virgin in distress. I actually love the progression of the book. Keep it up author!

Dear author, please release more chapters daily. It's kinda slow and waiting doesn't feel good. Free chapter would be nice gift for my power stone.

loved hope it continues to doing well...