At The Bar [Me &..her]

it was really good in writing quality but it started with MTL at chapter 41 which destroyed it.

I don't always write reviews, but I feel like I had to for this novel. Despite all the praise this novel received, I couldn't even read past chapter 20. Here's why.First and foremost, the translation and update stability is top notch. Now to the main problem. The story have way too many plot holes. For example, he came from Earth to another world that is only similar to Earth, yet he assumed that everything is the same, especially herbs and other ingredients. He's a scientist, yet he magically possessed the ability to make realistic drawings of different herbs. Moreover, events just popped out of nowhere to force the plots. A beggar telling you he's good at making drugs, so you just hire him without any testing, make him your chief drug refiner, and give him a 50% share of your business?The MC is a normal scientist, he got pickpocketed. He got helped by someone to catch the thief, then he suddenly invited him into making a business contract because he can smell herb from that guy? Not to mention his follower literally got pulled away against her will to become an immortal out of nowhere. Two paragraphs later, it's as if he's already forgotten about her, and everything is back to normal. Was this so the author doesn't have to bother writing about the interaction with the girl?All in less than half a chapter. Does that even make sense? Then some assassin tried to poison him with the poison from a tree with heavy smell? He, a normal person who just suffered from a fail attempt at opening meridians, was careful enough to smell a cup of water in his room before drinking? Moreover, just as the Lords were talking about how to deal with him, he showed up for absolutely no particular reason. Why? There are no reason at all for him to show his face. The author was too lazy to write something like "the lord invited him

Good and Original.Writing Quality:5/5 the Author makes barely any mistakes.He used a vast amount of diffrent word.Story devolpment:The mc doesnt get a cheat without a reason that allows him him to overpower everyone.The Author made the story original and realistic. Updating Stability:5/5 I mean its free.World background: The Author made the World background complicated and original but easy to understand,so I dont have much to say other that 5/5

good to read. I want more chapters I give 5 stars for more chapters. give me more chapters... 5 stars for more chapters. I want them.. I need them.. more chapters.

The story is pretty fun so far. It's a fantasy male to female GB which is something I'm fond of. But I understand it's considered one of the more eccentric tastes and plenty of of readers dislike. The best thing about the story is the dialogue, without the comedic dialogue between characters it might be considered a bit dark. Only slightly, nothing I would consider truly dark so far. Just somewhat discomforting if you think about it. So don't think too much and enjoy.As for Worldbuilding it's only just starting so I can't really say anything about it. I do hope our cute tsundere foxkin missy can catch a break or calm down a bit *heh* eventually. Overall I'd this is the kinda story where you laugh at the MC's suffering and antics while still hoping the best for them. Seems contrary but that's how it is for me.

It's a fantastic fantasy story. I love the characters. Plot is intriguing and not boring. This is perhaps the best magic story here in webnovel.

I'm honestly wondering what on Earth am I watching because ... I don't really know what's to come next. But still updating the novel with new chapters makes it decent to read it more.

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