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MayoNutSpoonsies
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- July 1,2024
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Aziel’s story begins with quiet determination, and I appreciated the worldbuilding around the Artemis orphanage and the mysterious figure in the woods. The academy arc is shaping up to be full of potential rivalries and growth. I’m curious to see how Aziel overcomes the obstacles in his path and rises through the ranks. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes!
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The story is nice and is so interesting, I am hooked
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The beginning is rather simple, but I was very impressed with the events.
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the story is interesting and a bit unique but chapter are posted to rarely
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The story, synopsis and the world background is truly astonishing. Its so good I couldn't give it a bad review even if I tried. Some really nice work
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This novel does a great job with providing vivid descriptions and setting the tone of the story immediately.The opening chapter was well written, with cool characters being introduced, along with some great lines and descriptions.The story does start off slow, but it’s compensated by the world building being set for a grand story.All in all, a story I would definitely recommend if you’re into reincarnation!Great job, author! 👍🏻
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this book seems very similar to reborn evolving from nothing
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Hey guys its the author here. This message is just to tell all of the readers who happen to run into my book. If you enjoy it please add it to your collection and give me a review. If there anything I can improve in my work, please let me know as well. Thanks :))
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so far so good 💯, I'd really recommend it if you're into gaming 😜
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It's got a lot of potential but I can't stand the writing style (thats on me). The characters are a bit two-dimensional, they all seem to speak the same (in other words, it's like the author is speaking through them. They aren't quite their own people, ifykwim). I even skipped to the end but it doesn't seem to be fixed.The prose is all right even though it seems befitting for a trad novel. The plot develops at a normal pace. The vibes remind me of JJBA. I do hope the author fixes the formatting since it's hard to read on phone. In any case, I would recommend this book when it's reached a few hundred chapters.Good luck, author
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very nice i love where it's going, it's very interesting keep up the good work
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Since this is my first review, I'll be frank. First, your quality of writing needs to be improved, because in the dialogues you messed up a few of them. Second, worldbuilding. You need to specify where the empires or countries where they are located. Overall, your story has potential, so keep writing, and I'm also looking for more!
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