Thirsty Love

Awesome! Keep it up bro! That was a nice plot you have there! Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Ichijoku makes the right decision though ☹️. Sorry for the guy🥺

Writing Quality is actually ok for me. But almost everything else is all wrong. Cheat is kinda weird. It says evolution but it says hidden evolution but still the standard lizard to snake to python to flood dragon to blah blah blah template. Classic sparrow bird template. And for his second beast he just had to get a cloud mist beast that publicly only has a Level three potential leading to another few rounds of underestimation and mocking from enemies and face slapping from the MC. No depth, No originality, nothing fascinating and no twist and turns. No tension, no charm, bland and lacks relativity and creativity. And the funny thing is that this book still had more than 16k Powerstone supporting it. Ain't that funny? way more than the leading book on the Powerstone rankings. And it's absolute garbage. World background is lacking. All experienced readers, prepare to lose some brain cells if you read this.Cliche lines, cliche plot, very predictable.My final evaluation, Author is terrible at writing with zero innovation. Unless of course this is just a trial read and the author isn't taking this seriously.

this seems really interesting!! hoping for it picked !!                                                         ...........................................

I really like this novel but today whenever I try to click in to read a chapter I'm unable to get to it this is the second novel on webnovel.com that I've had this issue.

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super well written novel. I enjoyed reading it until he got to college ....and thats when the plot got kinda strange...however my advice to the author is to make the main character more consistent (which would improve the progression of the plot significantly). Your MC dabbles in too many things and then abandons them, and he is a little too perfect. Plus there are some major plotholes pushing the plot just to show off the MC's perfect skills and Gary-Stuness.  Take the time to develop his decision making and the thinking that goes into his actions. After reading for awhile i found the MC behaving like a drastically different person every chapter as if he has a split personality disorder. Please to slow down and justify the MC's actions, things happen too fast and for no reason other than his justice-boner. Let the MC enjoy his newfound freedom, I don't understand why you would make him basically return to his old profession when he has limitless potential. Overall this is down to a matter of taste, but to other readers i really do recommend you read this novel as it is significantly better than most novels you find on this site and has plot elements for everyone.

Easily the best novel out of all the one's currently in their trial period. I really hope this gets picked up.Easily the best novel out of all the one's currently in their trial period. I really hope this gets picked up.