I was always waiting for this book to be posted on FACEBOOK but now I'm ok 👌.  Thank you sthandwa sam its a beautiful story

Nice story I really love the starting it's very interesting.

A beautiful fiction novel with beautiful scenes. let all escape out of our heads, the pain and life struggles. join to visit a problem free world

this story is amazing, hoping to see more action

awesome chapter and the boss rulles i love this series

Great Story, Banging Story, Amazon story— no more words. It's refreshing to see a father-daughter concept with system. Frank is a good father but he might not be a good team member at the moment.Can't wait to see a character development in him. And I already love Elena, Max and Leo. They are sensible, care for Frank; so nothing can be grater than that for me.And Ana is adorable but we need more chs to know about her. Well, now main part why you should read this story.1. Top-notch grammar.2. A fast-paced storyline 3. Great Characters. (side + main)4. Unique Plot line.But it's too early to judge, I hope author-san doesn't disappoint me!

Another Villian Masterpiece 🤩🤩.Really love the novel, author please upload at least 10 chapters a day, and make it about 5900chapters long Less goo yeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

novel look good i just stating to read but there no update 2 days you drop the novel

Well written and very descriptive. The intensity of every chapter remains the same which would definitely get the readers into the action and the story itself. The struggles of the MC gaining his strength is also something to comment on as it makes the story more interesting and intriguing. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.

hello, author here I'm kind of new to writing history, but I've had this project for a while So if you have any criticism that could help me develop, I would appreciate it. :Dsorry for the review lol

You might love Mc, but my favorite is Baku.In my country Baku is spiritual monster, rumors say it exist, and there is proof.Anyways, I like the character design, and why is the system so cocky

INTENNSEEE!!! well-crafted fantasy with rich worldbuilding and high stakes. The lore is deep, the action scenes are gripping, and the protagonist’s journey is emotionally compelling. However, the pacing drags at the start, and some side characters could be more developed. Once it picks up, though, it really delivers. If you love high-stakes fantasy with vivid battles and deep mysteries, this is worth the read.