A beautiful lore, I hope the author doesn't, end the Novel

Hey, author here. So after releasing 100 chapters, I came to realise how far I’ve come in terms of my writing quality and pacing. I believe if you were to read chapter 1 to lets say chapter 40, it’s very different now but with that being said, I’m leaving my review on my novel. I will say that the first few chapters are slow but that’s because I’m introducing the world, their motivations, themes and characterisation. Layla came at chapter 1 but Emery and Zafira came later at chapter 3 or 4. Then atlas was around chapter 10+. It’s slow but I believe it’s worth it. Idk im my own biggest fan and critic. But thank you for reading The Broken Paths. I will do my best in writing and staying consistent.Also I will take any questions you have for me.

How i wish someone will read my book so ill  take more initiative on finishing it..

Chapter 1  is a fantastic start.  You've established a unique premise with Hengsheng's unexpected system power, setting the stage for an exciting, unconventional cultivation journey.  The initial scene in the Endless Void, showcasing the struggle between transcendent beings, is captivating and  immediately immerses the reader in this world's grand scale. Hengsheng's initial despair after being declared spirit coreless is very relatable, and you've effectively conveyed the emotional impact of his situation.  His determination and resilience shine through, especially in his interaction with his mother.  The pacing of the chapter is excellent, gradually building the suspense leading up to the reveal of Hengsheng's system power.  The "Ding! [Make a wish]" moment is both intriguing and promising, leaving the reader eager to discover the possibilities of this system.

So I read the first few chapters and I shall say that they are well written,lengthy and updates are stable as well. No complaints as the story line seems very interesting as well.

This book has a good pace, interesting. The book is highly recommendable.

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Amazing novel. Waiting for more chapters.

the story is good and the character is good

I really love that there is a webnovel that mentions my country nigeria, i highly recommend this book, i can't wait to read more chapters.ni

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I commend the the author for the time spent in crafting character design and world background. The descriptions were all too vivid for anyone not to understand the story. Most of the story contained just the descriptions of things that Vee did to get stronger and less on conversations with other people. As much as she wants to develop on her own, the road to the top is never easy. That's why I think she needs one friend who'll always be on her side. Dern is annoying, I'm not Vee but even I know that. Very thrilling story but I only felt that at the earliest chapters with her brother and when she was still around people.