The writing style is great, story line is interesting and fast paced. Left on a cliff hanger which adds to suspense makes you want to read more if your into apocalyptic settings.

bro don't drop the series please continue the series i will be waiting for the next chapter

A good start! i love how the story starts so far, i havent seen any grammar mistakes that ruin the flow of the story though it's only 11 chapters as of now i'm sure this will get alot more attention around the 30/35 mark, readers want to binge so don't be discourage if you dont have any traction just yet ^^ keep at it author

I'm not a fan of FL novel, but this one is unique! Every time i read its chapter, i become more interesting to know what happen in the next chapter. I curious about FMC's fate at the end. I like the FMC persona, she is like a normal girl that want a happy life, but so many obstacles in her life. I recommended this novel!

It's really bad, I'm trying to read this, but I can't. I know it's a translation, but it still sounds like RAW. The story has a lazy narrative where everything is told directly and nothing is shown to us, the dialogues are weird. Not to mention that if Laila was replaced by a male character, it wouldn't make any difference.

it's fantastic, I literally binged all the current chapters in one sitting and I'm pretty sure this book is going to cause me some financial problems. Will most likely be selling a kidney to the author for bonus chapters 10/10

Pertamax 😎📖🥇 Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

interesting book from the amount of chapters i have read that is... i love that there's no grammatical error at all... and i can't wait to see how Nick will navigate this new world. Good job authror😊

somebody tell me why this book isn’t on everyone’s library? it’s really not getting the engagement it deserves for realit’s such a good boook. I love the mortal and greek god combo. I recommend for the girls on here!Hades is such an ass sometimes and Aurelia will get them both killed😂😂

I feel like anything with System in the title should be a tad bit faster paced than this, but since I'm not sure about the entirety of the author's vision, I'm assuming it's necessary build up.That said, even though the story is a bit slow to reach the system part, I think the author does well to keep the readers engaged. The relatability of Jack Anderson's life is one thing that I feel can retain the attention.His bad luck and rotten living conditions with only the slight sweetness offered by Kelly as the love interest was enough to keep me reading. While the quality of the writing could use some work (quite a bit of it, actually), it's readable, but I urge the author to aim higher. There is a nice story to work with here, but I do fear that some readers might feel betrayed by the pace.Good work though

If I had more votes, I'd vote for you man keep it up 😎,I feel you are indeed underrated man,y'all we need to get this author going,he needs more love and support guys

Read up to Chapter 18 and this shit has a lot of potential. I've read a fuck ton of "Extra" novels and tho this ain't the best (TNE and Reborn as an Extra exists) it is still a solid read. The updating stability is also good with at least 1 chapter per day. His "Bloodline of Sacrifice" is also interesting and I don't think I've ever seen anything like it before (maybe I have but forgot, who knows?). Anyways lance don't you dare lock this shit at chapter 20 or some shit {be more like pancakes and just don't lock it :D}