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First 20 chapter solid 9/10 for me, a good read if you dont have anything more to read or you want some fantasy souls like world. Likeable characters but maybe a bit to fast-paced, I would spend more chapters explaining things more in detail

Dear Author,I like how you made the story from an apocalyptic settings, I also did write a book named World Apocalypse but sad to say it didn't get enough credit to have an exclusive contract.Anyways, about your book, it's nice. Keep it up!

Hello dear readers,I am a new author and it's my first book on webnovel. Your support will mean a lot and will motivate me to write better. please do give this story a try. I promise it has many twists and secrets and its full of suspense that'll keep you on edge. The first two chapters might feel slow paced but if you continue, it'll be worth it. And please leave a review and comment your thoughts about the chapters. I want to engage with my readers and make the experience better.

Okay, I’ve read up to the latest chapter, so I think I can give a relatively fair review.Overall, I think it’s a pretty good read .Now for a deeper look:Personally, the start was a bit slow and confusing, but that’s understandable as the author was still trying to shape and understand his own world.One thing I noticed was the mix of Eastern and Western names and structures (e.g., Alex, baron…).Honestly, I think it would’ve been better if you focused entirely on an Eastern style and naming scheme. That would’ve given the story a deeper and more immersive feel.Another thing was the tournament, it lasted way, way too long. I even considered dropping the story or skipping that part.After that, though, things started to pick up.Lastly, I hope you don’t stretch the slave mark subplot for too long.And,It would be great if you shifted more toward an Eastern theme. You could do that by introducing new characters with Eastern names and slowly phasing out the older ones, or letting their lights fade out.Anyway, good luck, fellow author! Keep going. (Evil Mark approved, I’ll add it to my list.)

Writing this story has been such a journey for me, and I’m so proud of how far it’s come. 💙 Alex and Clara are my heart in words, and I hope you can feel their struggles and growth like I do. There are moments that make me laugh and moments that make me think deeply—just like life. The way the story evolves is everything I wanted it to be, and I can’t wait for you to see where it goes. I’m so thankful for everyone who’s been with me on this ride so far. 😔 There’s still a lot ahead, and I hope you’ll keep coming along for the emotional rollercoaster with me. Thank you for reading and supporting!

"Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my novel! I truly appreciate your support, and I hope you enjoy this adventure as much as I enjoyed writing it. Your thoughts and feedback mean the world to me, so feel free to leave a comment—I’d love to hear what you think! Stay tuned for more chapters, and I hope you continue this journey with me!" 😊

FL is such a refreshing protagonist. I can see she won't be your regular protagonist, not someone with weak heart.

This novel delivers a thought-provoking commentary on topic. Characters are engaging, but the pacing drags in parts. Still, a worthwhile read.

i started reading novel in web novel app newly,but i liked yhis series so you must read this.g=just give a try...now i am going  to continue reading this. i hope you will also like it

5/5 stars no drama ✨ So firstly congratulations on starting a new seventh book author San!!! i internally screamed when i was notified huhuhu! so now for actual lengthy review the writing quality is topnotch as always. i like the flow of chapters which are somewhat refreshing and funny while still witty and a hint of tension. OFFICIALLY LOVE OUR MANBUN HUBBY. They're soo cute and we can already see the dynamics and can't wait for more! Over I Like how progressive our female lead is. She has endured so much and can't wait for her to gobsmack her parents. I'll probably leave another review once I'm more into the story but for now, one of the best things that happened in 2025.

The novel is interesting and fun to read when you're bored, but the story reminds me of the Korean manhwa The Genius Academy Blinker in several ways, such as the skill that can only use movement techniques.