It has a fast start, but the story slowly gets better and better. Nice. I hope to read more. Keep writing.I'm looking forward to discovering his new academy experiences and his reunion with Sabrina Snow!

Ay ano ba yan! 3 chapters pa lang. Invested na agad ako kay Eva

This first chapter of has grabbed my attention from the very first page. The vibrant descriptions of the Dragons Festival and the diverse races of Romero create a rich and immersive world that I'm already eager to explore further.  The sudden, violent eruption of the Voidrifts is a brilliant way to shatter the initial peace and introduce the central conflict. Jorn's confusion and disorientation as he grapples with his new reality are palpable, making him an instantly relatable character.  The mystery surrounding his reincarnation and the nature of his chaotic power, the "chaos flame," is incredibly compelling.  The author does a great job of balancing world-building with action, keeping the reader engaged without overwhelming them with information.  The encounter with the Elves, though brief, adds a layer of complexity and hints at the dangers lurking beneath the surface of this seemingly peaceful world. The pacing is excellent, with the tension steadily building towards the explosive climax where Jorn unleashes his power. The writing style is engaging and evocative, painting a vivid picture of Romero and its inhabitants.  The chapter ends on a fantastic cliffhanger, leaving me desperate to know what happens next. I'm particularly interested in seeing how Jorn will learn to control his unpredictable power and how he will navigate the treacherous political landscape of Romero while facing the threat of the ever-expanding Voidrifts.  I'm definitely hooked and can't wait to read more!

I created an account specifically to rate this incredible story. It truly is a masterpiece that excels in its unpredictability, keeping me enthralled throughout. Thank you for this amazing piece ❤️

Very interesting novel. This may be the best football story on this site. Keep up the good work!

Only read the first two chapters, Some very rare an unnoticeable grammatical errors, but the author does a good job of piquing interest from the synopsis and start of chapter two.

I like the Leo Skyshard better in this novel he's not as arrogant or showoffy as in the first novel. Even tho I didn't finish the first one because of the constant change of viewpoints and the fact that Leo was way too secretive about his identity even to his family plus his arrogance and stuff like that

it's nice, some mistakes but I mean who doesn't. Try proofreading them.  a little bit too fast paced. but overall, good story.

A novel with a really good start, it's fast pacd and filled with funny monologues. hope the author doesn't drop it.

Readers I advise you to read this book don't let it pass you.

Author.Happy New Year!!I am glad to see a new book. The first 20 chapters are awesome. I am looking forward to reading from you and enjoying this masterpiece and I will be with you on the journey.

99 days with my Idol is basically my first book. I really do hope you like it 💛😊