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NickaidodHf
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This is very interesting! I liked Theo, eventhough he isn't male lead, my heart is with him, he is cute and caring and trustworthy too.....I hope he and fl could end up together .... can't wait to read more
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Hello. I'm the author and i want to drop a review on my book. so this is my first book ever . There might be problems but I'm trying to become better. I think the quality of my chapters are still improving . let's see where it goes
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I held off reviewing until now, because I wanted to wait and give my honest opinion of this novel, and now I can finally say it's peak. Why's it peak? because the author writes with passion. The story doesn't feel soulless. If you like "Red Rising" you'll mostly enjoy this. The MC is not a generic, copy and paste character. He has personality. The dynamic he has between other characters are well written. The grammar is good, though I'm sure there's room for improvement, I'm too dumb to notice.The power system is great, from what I've seen so far. It's actually quite unique, I haven't seen anything like it. The Mc's power seems like it's going to be alot of fun to see how he uses it.overall I came expecting silver and struck gold instead, I really hope the author continues this story!
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A powerful and suspenseful story! The author has created an intense atmosphere that makes me feel the emotions of the main character. The way he is dealing with his past, his guilt, and his search for identity is beautifully written. I also love the deep conversations. They make you reflect on life. Iโm excited to see how the story unfolds!
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Pertamax ๐๐๐ฅ Thanks for the Books!!!!! ๐ ๐๐ปOh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ๐๐๐๐๐ We are all looking forward for the next chapters ๐ฅฐ๐๐ท
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a shameless author was bornbut, Writing Lost in Fatal Existence has been an incredible journey, and Iโm truly grateful to everyone who takes the time to read and share their thoughts. This story is a mix of mystery, adventure, and deep emotionsโsomething Iโve poured my heart into. Itโs not perfect, but every chapter is a step toward making it better.I appreciate every reader who sticks with the story, whether you're here for the world-building, the characters, or just the thrill of the unknown. Your feedback, whether itโs praise or constructive criticism, helps me improve and keeps me motivated to continue writing.So, to all of you reading, thank you! I hope you enjoy the journey as much as I enjoy writing it. Letโs see where Lost in Fatal Existence takes us next!
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Very interesting take on the isekai genre with a unique main character.
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i love these kinds of stories and and the backstory of the mc is amazing
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The story and characters develop in a fun and interesting way that makes it hard to put down. If you are like me youโll end up reading chapter after chapter not even realizing you have read more than one as they flow together seamlessly.
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The beginning had its issues- mostly writing. But as we move on it becomes much better, although a small tip I'll give author is that when writing dialogue try to flesh out exposition more to make it more interesting (use the pope in pool method haha).Author also needs to publish stably! It's very important, at least three chaps a week for the readers! Please be steady, author.Story development is going smoothly. No erraticness and character design is as interesting as it gets, without spoiling anything, each has there unique traits that draws you in.The world background is immersive, if you read game novels then you probably know better but I don't read them. Despite that, to me, the world background is striking enough to leave a memorable impact. So idk the standards since I don't read game novels but to me this is nice.In total, its an good novel, improvements will make it even better, its still in its early stage with lots of potential after all! Keep improving in writing quality author as well as uploading streak, stop taking so much time to upload~.
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this book made me recall a series I once watched back in the day.For being such a marvelous piece of, enough to give me naustalgia, I'll give it a ten.the writing and depiction of characters is just superb.
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pretty impressive so far ๐๐ let's see how it goes further on
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