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Wow An Age gap romance, I'm impressed. I love Grace so much.   Mr Black too,   Also please give us a spoiler , would she ace the auditions?

The first chapter is so captivating. The detailed description of the action engulfs your mind, like you a part of the happenings. Perfectly written.

If the author of this novel was 12 years or younger: Great concept! You are an intelligent young author with good ideas. Please develop your writing and let us enjoi your works in the future.If the author is older... at least 16 or more.... ARG!!!Usually I like this kind of story - Beast-Taming, getting Stronger, a system for adds. However, in this story it is presented so plainly and... arg!-First of all, the language, even if machine-translated, is kindergarden-level.-Szene-Descriptions are awfull in their composition, especially the fights.- I am only at chapter 14 or so, but the plot is jumping and jumping ahead, with sequenses and szenes other novels would make 3-12 chapters for AT LEAST, which here are implemented, rushed down and... not usefull at all.- Power-jumping is the next thing. Just a few sentences ago something was explained to only work at higher level, MC does it earlier... with no explenation for HOW! It was just neccessary - NOT!- Dumb characters, which are so 2D, that I fear they could degrade to 1D with a little less care...- The resoning of the MC and the characters is another thing and... "Ah, he is doing somthing dangerours... but he is MC... he says he wants to do it... how could I forbid it, even thought I am responssible for his safety?" WHAT KIND OF LOGIC LEVEL IS THAT????ARg! I m frustrated, because the idea behind the story seemed good and interesting, but - I am not sure if that is TOO hard - the author makes nearly EVERY mistake an author can make in the development at the beginning AND seems not to care about his own naming of techniques, at all..Sorry, I am frustrated....

This book is like most cheat protagonists. But this story is written in a more slowly and clearer way (Better way). Instead of others story the protagonist actally tells people that he didn't do it on his own like there an extra force helping him. And his friends also get help from people.

Nice, funny, exciting.....All kind of feelings mixed into one....Please release this novel.....Do not remove it from the main voting list.......

Excellently written!!! Usually,I am not a fan of system novels, but this book has sparked my curiosity and I ended up reading. It was totally worth it!!! The plot itself appears promising and the characters are well written. Most of the system novels does not show much detailings about background setup or the world- but this story just blew my mind with the portrayal of the world and the main characters. Author have an excellent command over the language and I wonder why it shows low views for this gem? Kudos to the author, keep up the good work 👍👍👍

The progression feels to fast and I dislike the characters so far. Feels like a wish fulfillment story. But as far as begining writing this story has some potential maybe it will get better.

Lucien looked at the Lady with great apprehension as she walked leisurely while the storm brew, unusually, no rain fell, "Why would you allow that?" he asked in a somewhat irritated manner.