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Gik3K0
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HelloThe progression is good of this book.Keep at it. I guess you can develop his Gold finger as he develops his mana.Now I know we are not limited to only 1 beast to be tamed as the teacher had 2 so far.I'd like to know if the beast master himself has talents and how it is dependent on the beast too.For example, if the beast adept will the beast master be held for that? what if the beast master had a Mythic one, they'll develop to be Mythic? how does beast master's role play into this? I'd like more ideas of how the world is and more explanations of beasts and bonds and development.I know it's just 12 chaps now so I'm looking forward to how it develops and implements.Keep on going!!! Good Job!
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It's an awesome book. I loved it. Big congratulations to the author Adityadev Nair. You nailed it man. It's romantic, thriller, survival, adventure etc. As a reader I prefer this as one of the best best book I've ever read. I've read many books in my life but this hits different❤️u200d🔥
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Very good read and incredibly rich with extensive word play, where the attraction to each individual character who drives you to find out what happens next; making you eager for more and see what unravels. Strongly recommend for an exciting read with a lot of to take in, hopeful to see more from this author ^
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author, will you start uploading Lk, and astral (novels) again or have you dropped them and started a new one again.😞
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nice I didn't expect from the author because of their previous work but the story is 😍 pretty great
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As usual, the author keeps me hooked to her stories. This is one of the funnest apocalypse stories that i have read so far. Ended up finishing all the chapters available quickly. Please give this story a read. You will not be disappointed!🥳🥳🥳
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No offense, but I'm going to be honest this time author.You introduces a lot of alternative terminology to enrich the narrative and expand the world-building, and I think that's good. However the problem is, it was way to abrupt for me. This kind of transition may leave some readers feeling disoriented. A more gradual integration of these new terms will be a better way to enhance the reader's immersion and understanding.Example, instead of suddenly introducing unfamiliar words without context, you might consider weaving them into the dialogue or descriptions more organically. This would be a better approach to allow readers to acclimate the new vocabulary, so it'll smooth like a butter to read. Another is, when the man at the first episode, who's name is Lord katsura, decides to call him 'Lucy the silver hammer', it was way too sudden bro. as if he seen a weak kid, abruptly think he smart to understand the situation, and then like, ah, you are a kind of a hero boy, I name you Lucy the silver hammer instead of Lucian. I don't know if the Japanese or Chinese will make it sounds cool, but this is English, it is better for author to follow the context at hand. And, to construct the narrative in a more engaging way is definitely way better than just dumped the info without a preceding the even to build momentum. as a writer myself, I want a critic that served to improve my writing. hope author don't get offended by this, and sorry I kinda busy with my job, so I won't lengthen this whole review. overall, while few thing perhaps need to be improved by the author, the story itself had a significant potential to go far, especially the idea about, Tama: the sacred jewels etc.kyuketsuki: some kind of demon or monster(in chp1) trying to possess the mother. Tama artist and many more. It was a new concept that is intriguing. Do give it a try!?
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It's not a real review. I'm just asking if this has Yuri or ntr before I get too invested
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Woah. ... A new concept love the unique bits! Good storyline and very well done! Nice work author!
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A compelling story with engaging characters, vivid world-building, and a well-paced plot. The narrative keeps readers invested, offering moments of tension, emotion, and intrigue.The overall experience is enjoyable and leaves a lasting impression.
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Love this book so far😍 Will there be more chapters dear author? Please don’t drop the book🙏
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Marie's teasing is getting into the nerves of everyone hahah
A smile that hides the knife