The First Store System

It's pretty good so far (20 chapters) and although it is kinda like a l replica of big shot it's a bit different. Overall I think it will be a good read as long as the translation continues to translate well and as long as the chapters are consistent

I honestly feel it's jumping the gun making the book premium so soon and that's why I've decided to make my review. Slight spoilers btw.The writing can get very repetitive, using the same words and identifiers constantly within the same paragraph. Character and story are also pretty generic. Kid died, got reincarnated,  finds out he has a OP system, the works. As far as the MC goes he's about as spicy as flour. No motivation beyond "getting stronger" after they get invaded and he sees his parents die, it's now "get stronger to get revenge". His dialouge and interactions are pretty meh as well.. It's fight scene, talk about how crazy the fighting is during the fight, then eyyyyy I got some stuff, rinse repeat. Conversations are stiff and don't really add much, there is even a section where he and his father do entire conversations from looking at each other. Overall the writing quality is average, the world building is kinda interesting, almost more so than the main story line at times. But at barely 50 chapters with a pretty lackluster story and these issues I feel the author is riding off his success with other novels. His promise of a Mashup of novels seems to be the end goal and to me he's rushing there at the cost of the story.

My feeling for author when he learning stretching dao:             ....................................................................................................................................

Absolutely loved it till atleast the big tournament in 2nd year. Has all the stuff that makes a xianxia great, is super engaging and has a rare smart MC. Same with the romance, amazingly well done. That scene with the stars gave me flashbacks of watching the iconic Bakemonogatari confession scene. Really liked it. What I didn't like was the MC resetting his talent to 5 stars. Seemed like the only not perfect card dealt to him in this life was also taken away. Completely random & unnecessary too since he was already making his way around it. Also didn't like the entire 5 élément stuff. Almost every xianxia MC have that, kinda sick of it now. Imo authors should not just give their MC everything. Give him metal, or wood or wind or water affinity. Let him be stronger in some areas and weaker in others cause of it. And let him use his knowledge to work around these weaknesses. 5 élément MC, or fire/lightening are so generic they just feel bland in a way, makes me kinda disappointed since the novel is pretty great otherwise.Still its just minor issues. All in all, great read. Definitely recommended.

This novel deals with   totally different themes.This makes an exciting read. Whatever apparently appearantly is made into  truths unraveled.This app is doing a magnificent service to the community of read readers and writers...

Umm This novel is very good I am not that good at judging story's but I really enjoyed it I recommend it Btw Author please publish more chapters DONT YOU DARE DROP IT

was super strong invisible dragon was inbisible but he saw him and super strong

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