Nice story. The characters are very dynamic and I like the author's style of writing. I'll keep following. Keep up the good work 😃

it looks good now it could nose dive down in quality tho

This book is just a feeling in and of itself. Read the first chapter and for a moment I forgot I was reading a novel 😌Great work author 👌

I really like the story, I think it's worth reading, and it's clear from the first chapter that it has great world building.

I loved It. Please don't drop this work. I like the concept. There will be a harem to Kyla?                                                                                                                                                           . .        ,                                                                                                                                      

Hey 👋👋 big fan of yours  what a plot it's so vivid 🔥🔥Best wishes 💖

Quite exciting and interesting storyline.... Waiting for the next chapter eagerly, hope the author updates the next chapters as soon as possible. Love the starting and waiting for the further story. 🤩😍

I like short stories 😂... I'm just hoping for daily updates 😂

Great novel, the premise is greatAs of now(chp 11)A few things to mention There are potential but they are not important as it seems it can be increased by training or evolving The grammar is not bad but there are a few spelling mistakes( it nothing to big)The novel is set in the past and from what I can gather it nether our world or the Pokémon world( it called Gaia it similar to Pokémon world but not the same I feel like)The mc is the 10th son of dukeIt seems like he is hiding his potential(they think he is average not bad) at the start which I do not like but at least he is not like those protagonist who get stepped on

Writing: The quality of writing is good, consistent and with its own flair. A few hiccups and typos, but nothing that would break the immersion. Overall its pretty decent and feels like it would be polished even more over time.Updates: So far the updates have been consistent and the chapter length does not wary over the updates which is a plus. consistency is good.Story: A bit confusing in the start, especially since we start with the Girl's POV while the summary mentions it to be a MALE MC story, but give it a few chapters for the mystery and plot to settle in. Gets better and intriguingCharacter design: My comments over the various chapters will display how I feel about this. If you can make a reader hate your characters based on their interactions, that means a good job. World Background: This seems almost good, but could be better. Or rather I would say, the way its been put out for the readers needs a little more explanation. But maybe more will be explained as I read further. Overall: A good story so far, definitely worth a read.Score: 4.9

tbh it is too quickly paced but its truely is nice to read something different. it is giving me some manga vibes. lwk wish that it wasn't as violent... but i can stay for the next chapter

Kaelith you Basta*d!!!... how dare you hurt her like that.