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Will75
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- July 1,2024
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I love the novel. am literally fixated. keep it up.
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A unique name and an intresting story, with the information in sypnosis and the few chaps I read, There is a huge potential in this novel if the pace and quality is matched. weldone author.
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Fifty chapters down, time to leave a review.The story is well written and we can tell the author took a lot of time to plan the world-building, it was not too complicated and the book catches you off guard from the beginning and before you know it, you find yourself reading more chapters to know what happens next.
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This is my first book on this app and from what I have read so far it's really good. Minerva reminds and Priscilla are hands down best girl. But that aside, not only is it well written it also unique. I don't know of the concept of having a fanfiction universe meaning that mc gets reincarnated into a fanfiction version of his favorite game universe was ever done before but I really like it. That aside y'all know any good romance book were mc treat their lover with respect and has actual romance not ntr please.
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I loved it π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯° Very interesting plot and storyline.Amazing characters. Hope they get a happy and sweet ending.Great work Keep it up author.πππππππ
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Good synopsis. Right contentbut just feels a bit too un-intimate? If it can be more homely, I think it can become a perfect synopsis
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I took my time crafting this review because I was completely captivated by the novel! The tension and mystery truly stood out, keeping me on the edge of my seat. The suspense was so well done that I found myself eagerly turning each page.The character development was exceptional, so seamless and relatable! The illustrations were beautifully crafted, especially the struggles of Aurora's adoptive parents as they tried to protect her from all the prying eyes and shadows around them. The themes of mystery, suspense, and adventure really resonated with me and made the story even more engaging.I canβt recommend this book enough! If youβre looking for an enthralling read, this is definitely one you wonβt regret diving into. Happy reading!
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love ur novel,omg,am extremely satisfied reading ur novel
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First time im writing a review about a novel so i will be honest. The ideia behind the novel is good, but the author makes no sense of it, no world building, no explanations of how things came to be, no nothing. He forgets abouts the things says in chapters like,1 example: MC(rank F) acts like a allmighty being against a B rank and challenges him to a fight in due a week?(1 month? dont really remember) then 3 to 4 chapters says that he has to "play low" (in a Γ‘rea wihlth ONLY F and E ranks) so that he doenst get in trouble like "stupids mcs" from others novels. Like wtf, did you forget about what you wrote in before!?!?!?!?....And guess what he did yes, because its been weeks and zero mention about the fight.2 example: When MC entered the new zone with the new base there was a mention of an horde that would "challenge" the lords of the new zone in 10 days and once again the author totally forgot about that. There are so many more like this ones that its just sad. Im not telling you to give up on writing, but try to remake and improve before continuing to progressing the novel.Keep the consistency of his power.. If he can summon 20 skeletons in the new area everyday then in the chapter 95 he should have something like 200 skeletons( half at least F+) , or something like 20 E+/D and in the latest chapts author says he can already summon 60 skeletons a day(its been a while already so dont really remember) so MC should have an army of skeletons and you cant use the excuse of "sacrificing" them for power forever. You say one thing in chapter and another in the next. Once again, Im not telling you to give up, but a lot of improvement is needed. Im not an expert and not a writer, just a reader who gave his opinion.If you think Im wrong dont hesitate to let me know.Cumps,
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Another reminder, this novel will remain free. I might lock the first or last chapter for the fun of it, but anyone can just use their fast pass to unlock it. That's all I have to say. if you wish to contact me or ask questions, my discord is ky0aniAgain, this novel will remain free. Most of my novels (if I ever do write more) will most likely be free. I do not need money (i'm well off for the next 200 years) so keep donations to yourself. I'm not sure if power stones are free too, but if they cost money, please keep it to yourself or use it on other novels. bye. (ββΏββΏ)
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Would like to know the chinese title for this novel. Thanks ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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So good so far im digging the whole japanese vibe love it πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Transmigrated to Primitive world with a system