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Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

Giving yourself a review is norm so let me continue. The story will be slow yet fast paced. My writing quality will improve with each chapter. The scenarios present are not for faint hearted who doesn't like violence or betrayal. It might be disturbing but ultimately realistic. I hope you all will love it. Also remember 'Kindness is not reciprocated here''.

Hey, Jallen here. This is a work that I had briefly published a while back on Webnovel and it's now back.The concept is a mix of Cultivation Online and Monster Evolution. So, if you are a fan of those books/concept, then you will surely like this book.Let me answer the common questions here.Q: Will there be romance?-> Yes, but it will take a while for it to appear. By my estimates, it will appear once we have crossed the 100 chapter mark.Q: Will the game world and real world mix?-> I am not sure about this just yet. However, the game world will have certain influences over the real world. I'll let you read so that you can find out more about that.Q: Will the Main Character evolve into a human?-> Yes, the main character will be able to evolve into a human in the future. However, it will take a long time and will be a long-term goal of Kai (the MC).I think that should cover most of the common questions. If you any other questions, just leave them below.I hope you enjoy reading this new story of mine!

I love the uniqueness in writing, especially the names, very creative! I'm onto the locked chapters next! 🥺

As I always say, system themed stories have a way of making any small flaw go unnoticed. I wish there was more focus on worldbuilding. Nevertheless, the writer does a great job at anchoring the readers interest. This goes to the collection.

Good job 👌                                                                                                                                                                                                         .

it is not anything amazing but it is well written and can be one of the novels u will find a good read and the author is trying to give a backstory and meaning to it

Overall a Good story. I sense there is still a lot more world building hidden and the character of Non human with couple of bloodlines brings a fresh breath in this genre. Hope the Author Drakal continues to make it more interesting. Grammar and structure is alright and the switch between POV is also not that jarring.

This author's work is always top-notch. Can't wait to see how he progresses this story.

very interesting and weird twist for a story plot.

Just for the fp, story plot is good but grammar is not 😥