BLANK (Bookstore Deities 2, Taglish)

A very solid webnovel in it's current state. There are a few things that should be worked on such as punctuations and whatnot but the overall story is quite engaging, I like the world building and the characters aren't all that bad. The character design really doing it for but maybe that's cause I lack imagination. Overall has a great story and plot, looking forward to future chapters and what's to come.

The translation is good but the story development is going too fast the mc is growing stronger to fast and he is also too kind by giving away his system technique to another for no reason at all.

Sorry if the review is a bit of , i just write for exp so this is A story like library of heaven path but with current world life not cultivation world  setting, overall it's a good slice of life story , if you like facesmaking kind novel like IRAS or LHP  this novel is on your cup

This us a good novel, that's something that i should put out first, but it's not a novel for me, the beggining of the development of the novel i'd say it's among the best, but then comes the twist of him getting kidnaped and revaling all of that where he has at least 2 other personalities inside him that are problably super OP just from what we saw, and here the novel died for me, because there's no danger anymore, there's no doubt if the MC will get strong or not, it's such a strong plot device that the author can do whatever he wants, i don't know how the story develops, and i won't try to read it, another thing that made me make this decision was the personality shown of the other one inside him, and him losing his memories ( i saw that he regains them before 100 chapters in the comment section, but it did not change my will to drop it), now what is his motivation to get stronger? for me it's gone alongside with his memories, once again i'll say that it's a good novel, just not a good novel for me, i can see the effort that the author put into this novel, so it is a great novel, reading what i did was was enjoyable.P.S: Sorry if the grammar and writing is not good, as english is not my first language.

Are u kidding me? For real-are u just jealous and upset and deleted a bunch of reviews to bot your novel again. Lets see who has more patientce you or us.

A student kills a teacher, the head-boss comes over and is like 'Why they dead'. The mob is like ' Student bad, kill student'. Head-boss is like ' Ah this mob is too much' so decides to hold a battle royal, if Student wins they be free but if they lose, something happens.

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