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Eden6046
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- July 1,2024
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After reviewing my work I'm trying to be better but unfortunately I will probably will stop writing because of my exams and how IRL treat me this days my work is still on prologue state
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This is an awesome story! The writing is top-notch and the world-building is fantastic. The pacing is also great and the characters are well developed. I really got hooked with the story. Keep up the good work!
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5 star, cuz why not?. I am shameless, hell i stood at its peak. Though, well if you have doubts, just read the free chaps. You will get the understanding of the book. Then you can decide it, also let's point out some things.1. This is my second book, and not brag, but I have improved a lot like fr. So you can expect some less grammar mistakes and easy language. 2. The world building in this book, is quite large and fleshed out, so you can be assured about that. 3. Our MC is neutral, but he is cold and ruthless towards his enemies. He literally will kill anyone who tries to harm his lovers. 4. The book's main focus will be on Action and Romance but it also has a nice dose of slice of life chapters. 5. There is no yuri or any other same shit in the book. Though for smut, it will depend on the popularity and demand of the readers. 6. BEAUTIFUL GIRLS. 7. Even more BEAUTIFUL GIRLS.Now stop wasting your time here and go read buddy, also empty those power stones and golden tickets in your account, if you like the book. You can also use this section, as QnA section for the book.
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I really appreciate such mysterious stories in which MC has some extraordinary mental excellence yet his character is good towards others! Such MCs are my favourite type. Great work 👍
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Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
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"An absolutely captivating werewolf story! The world-building is rich, and the characters are incredibly engaging. The tension and excitement build with every chapter, keeping me hooked. Can’t wait for more!
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I so much love the comic version. I wish the novel had more chapters
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I love the story so far, it has given me a lot of inspiration and I find myself hard pressed to not create something similar with a father and his kids creating a ragtag team of adventurers. Loving Frank, with all of his faults, he is a good dad. There's a lot of action and intense moments that keep you reading. The stats aren't overdone which is nice for a litrpg. The stats are important, of course, but it's like not like every chapter bombards you with a bunch of text to read. The side characters are pretty solid too, they feel like actual people instead of just background noise. Everyone has their own struggles and unique personalities. There's a couple slow points, but it's an important part of the story, the character building is vital. The world building is pretty strong, I honestly expected it to just be another "transported to another world" kind of thing. It's giving some serious survival/horror/litrpg vibes. Honestly worth the read. I didn't have any specific reasons to give a score below 5 stars. It might be generous, but I mean the quality is great, the frequency of updates are solid, the development has no issues by my standards, the characters are wonderful, and the world background was more than I expected. So I don't think it's too much to give it a solid 5 stars. Keep up the good work, I'll save this for reading, and maybe jump into a couple chapters as they are released. My time is limited, but this is one thing that is worth budgeting for.
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This book is awesome from the start and tho there are a lil bit of inconsistency, the author may improve a lot soon.
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Hey 👋 great author, I want to share you some tips on how to grow your book performance, along with making fantastic book covers and I will also use line art to make animated animations let me know if u are interested so talk discuss better??
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Only read first few chapter interesting story. World building a little forced but with time should be a good story. Magic rules could be tighter
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What can I say except, masterpiece ✨ The subtle pace without haste or dragging, classy work.Definitely a must read, only complain is I might need drama, but thats me hehe.Anyway keep the good work, and amazing work, looking forward to next chapters. 💯💯
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