Trade Breaker

This story doesn't make any sense at all are you saying that an insignificant soul of THIS mortal is capable of affecting this god king, if so then you need to redo your power scaling because the soul of a this MC and his kind (God King Cultivator) is EXTREMELY lemme pin for you really EXTREMELY weak as weak as the mortal of the earth, from what i know cultivators have strong spiritual/mental strength that's why i'm telling you that you better come with a good friend excuse or redo the entire power scaling of the Mc's kind.What bothers me is how soft-hearted the Mc is(not saying he needs to be a typical chinese protag) going so far as to thank the previous owner of the body with that kind of personality is something you wouldn't expect to a being who claim to have walk and pave a path of blood and war to himself which made him look like a p*ssy to me.Again the fricking soul is what bothering me the most how fricking weak this cultivator must be to be affected by one insignificant mortal soul🤦🤦😑

Honest ReviewThe Good:  Love the background of this!  Nothing very new, but still different than a standard video game novel.  I also like it that it doesn't have any reincarnation or some other cheat system like so many on here do.The Bad:  MC started out good, but he suddenly went dumb around chapter 44...  The women swoon over the MC waaay to easily, the plot convenience is very strong in this, like how does he happen to find a legacy item when the hundreds of thousands before him missed it?  The gaming system itself needs improvement, it feels like the author doesn't have much experience with gaming.  This isn't a bad thing, but going 4 months without even getting one level is a little much.  Lastly, premium chapters so soon is terrible...  It's not hard to tell this is someone's first novel and charging SS for it is a bit shameless.  We may love those kinds of characters in novels, but not in real life.

If I have to be sincere, I read this novel till the end thanks to the characters around the MC... his friends, his teacher/master, his lover. As for the MC and the plot development? I felt disappointed and betrayed many times. The novel is well written with even the 'power-level' being well balanced. Sadly, I read and closed the novel for nothing more but curiosity and hope that the author won't mess or kill with the characters I so much loved in the story.The novel itself starts very slow-paced, but that is rather refreshing. The author knows well how to write the everyday events, training routine, common and funny days, etc.The first marking event of the novel that makes the MC completely abandon his 'home' in midst of the loss of his loved ones is what annoyed me from the start. How I can say... gave me that, "Oh~how convenient" vibe? That was the first forced part that I felt, and sadly many more appeared.The MC is TOO slow in maturing. We reach a point of the novel where he despite being aware of the dangers and 'loving' his friend and family, time and time again bought them to danger that could be avoided by chasing in the future when he was stronger (after all, the MC is aware of his own genius).Strangely, while he always ignores this act of neglecting his loved ones, he always breaks with random people or those that wanted to harm, r*ape or kill his family and friends. Of course, the character regretting or hesitating to kill a person is normal, but... the author messed so much with the forced events that he felt 'necessary', that the MC becomes something hateful, at the very least, for me.Concluding, is an amazing and complete story, but with adevelopment and ending that made me hate the novel even while living the characters.

Ok, so I will be truthful here. I just finish reading the first chapter, the grammar is great though I was confuse on what is happening on quite a few lines because it contains a lot of words and sadly I can't follow. But, oh well It looks good anyway. it's just the first chapter still quite a lot to check out. Imma continue reading

"It's a really strong school with a very interesting teacher." Insanity was 'interesting' and the nutter's house was made of some weird obsidian material.

(mana recovering)

"Hey, Merchant. How much for these?" He said as he pulls out the Three Strength Path Gu Worms out of his body. They were all rank 3! Jade Strength Gu!AchillesTendons Gu! Beast Strength Gu! They were all Gu Worms!

"Then you will also go to Namekusei?" Goku said surprised.