The story is interesting, I must admit that. I see that you're trying to portray the MC as a through and through villain who also has his humane side, its intresting read

I'm sure this will develop into a great story given your excellent track record, but I sincerely hope that you can just continue Records of a Dark Magus instead, it's still one of my favorite stories on this site

HBelial is such a refreshing protagonist because he doesn’t always come out on top. It’s rare to see a main character who isn’t unbeatable, and that vulnerability makes his story so much more engaging. His lowkey sinister vibe adds an edge to his character, keeping you on your toes, but what really sells it is his trash talk. It’s witty, cutting, and definitely gives off Spider-Man vibes—it’s the perfect mix of humor and menace.That being said, Cassidy is my personal favorite. He’s got that flare. But let’s be real—the guy gets no bitches, and I feel that on a personal level. Still, he’s an absolute legend, and I’m rooting for him to get the recognition (and maybe the romance) he deserves!

While reading the first chapter, I perceived the MC as a mischievous spoilt brat, but as I read on, I realized he’s actually sensible and mature for his age which is understandable due to his background.The story progresses quickly, and I was caught off guard by the sudden shift from the third-person narrative to first-person narrative in chapter 4, but I guess that works as well. Overall, the story is very good, and would have readers like me invested in it. Good job, author 😊

Hello Hello! This is your greedy author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know that! But any constructive criticism, comments and questions, I will always be here to answer your questions! Also, enjoy this work! I do them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thank you for reading!

It's a very good novel and for a long time I want to see an author that can blend incantation and juju practice into a novel. Although this novel didn't do much justice to the character the world building is the best I have seen on this site.

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This novel pulled me in from the first sentence! The eerie, poetic tone mixed with vivid descriptions makes every moment feel immersive. The tension, mystery, and fast-paced action are so well balanced, I couldn't look away. The writing is gripping, and I can't wait to read more. Amazing job! :3

This is better than I initially thought. nice one author. Also, be sure to give the mother enough screen time.  You can give it a try. I believe you'll like it.

The book is great , the chapters are interesting too and hook you in . Would recommend to read !!!

Some rich world building. The pacing can be faster. I am still waiting to find out what happened to Josh. Not really interested in Alena. Kalli sounds like a cool character, I will be rooting for her. Good luck for next volume

Binge read this story the past couple days, solid as hell. Characters are good, world is solid… smut peak. I’m really liking it. Only thing I’m not a fan of is the privilege system is a little wack, currently to gain access to 2 chapters it’s 1 coin, for 10 it’s 1000. Idk why it’s currently like that but that’s what’s keeping me from being fully up to date, I’m ok waiting for the normal updates.