Used As Collateral To The Mafia King: Mr. Winston Little Angel

I think I might have gotten heart demons from reading this. Fellow daoists please let the poison tester sect warn you out of this one.Nonetheless, if you possess any valuable treasures, submit them to this seat first. Should you return alive, they shall be yours to claim.

wow, great story, really liked it, until 40 it was translated very well. After that it was Machine Translated so it was not great, read about 42 chapters, story was good but translations did the rest for me to drop it.

First three chapters named prelude show MC being a spiteful youth, seem to have upset other readers.  However main story starts after this and he’s now calmer but still devious.Background settings of the story appears to be some derivative of the Heroes of Might and Magic universe.

It's an interesting story! I hope others love it like I do! And look forward to seeing what happens next in this very interesting and intriguing novel!  ❤❤❤❤❤ Thank you Author and translators! MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!!!

As I was reading I was pleasantly surprised by the easy flow of the story. It's easy to read and I didn't have to go over the same sentence/paragraph twice to understand what the author was trying to say. There is good pacing, and the paragraphs were nicely aligned. It tells me that the author has already grasped the basics of writing and has the potential for improvement in the future. The author should give themselves a pat in the back. Now for the cons: For most new writers when writing in the first person POV they do tend to overuse inner monologues as opposed to utilizing gestures and facial expressions as hints to the character's inner turmoils. Verbs such as frowning, smirking can also indicate mood. I would also like to see more active sentences rather than passive ones; it makes me more emotionally engaged.Overall it is a very good story and a worthwhile read. Other than the writing which has room for growth, the character development, world-building, and plot progression is intriguing and makes you hooked onto the story. Good job!

Both vehicles drove off.

Om Danil menceritakan pengalamannya selama kuliah di USA, ia menjelaskan dalam bahasa inggris,fasih banget.

"Yak eodiga? Tunggu aku!" berlari kecil mengejarnya yang sudah lebih dulu melangkah menuju halte bis. Sebenarnya aku sedikit takut berada didekatnya. Mengingat dirinya yang sekarang sangat ketus terhadapku.