From what I've read I think that this book really has a lot of potential, that's just my honest opinion

It has good potential please keep goingI really liked the story telling I think it was top tier  By the way this is my third light novel and I think it's pretty decent for a starter I would like to keep reading it every day

I quite enjoyed it and am looking forward to the sequel, which I hope will be even more captivating and filled with unexpected twists. It left me curious about what will happen next and how the story will evolve.

It's my first 18+ novel, and I'm really liking it✌️

Anyone debating it’s definitely a 5/5+ coming from this author!I’m super dumb and just realized that this is a sort of continuation of Terra nova  ——>     I was really surprised when I saw that Terra nova was completed so I didn’t check the recent chapters where IT EXPLAINED that there would be a part 2 and thought the author just dropped it… 🫠 Sorry I’m so dumb- I apologize to the author right now, you have huge dedication and you write many chapters per week so idk what I was thinking but yeah I was saving up to binge read chapters and then the novel was over so I think I just gave up or something...Really exited to read this novel so thanks for writing it! Also sorry for being dumb I’ll continue to give power stones to support u author…

It's a good book. There are quite a few grammar mistakes like the fact that 'it' is replaced be 'her' a lot and it made it a bit confusing at first but once I got used to it, it wasn't that bad. In the first few chapters there is also a serious lack of dialogue for the characters but once the author realized, the problem was fixed in the later chapters.Now the story itself. I had been looking for a couple system novel for quite a while and I couldn't find one so I was really excited when I found this one. The chapters when they first got the systems were really good, I won't go into details cuz of spoilers, but it was a bit extra but not too much so I enjoyed it. I expected a lot more romance than I got but I guess the romance will start when they get back to Earth which I'm fine with. I just feel like their affection rate increased without them actually getting closer. I'm really hoping that the romance picks up once they get back home.Also I want more dialogue between Idan and Arabel, I want to see them talking more and getting closer instead of it happening in the background and you just say something like 'after going for a walk and talking, the couple had grown closer'. I want to see what they said to each other, that would make the romance between them a bit more real to us instead of just increasing the percentage in the systems.

First of all, the book is damn captivating , like you see romance, you see drama and then I think 🤔 oh me God 😂 🤓 you know what author, keep doing you because your book is amazing. I said it before and I  am saying it again 🥰🥰 so much love 😘

your work reminds me with clasic story and refreshing my mind from lot of golden finger system novel

if somebody read the whole story can you please tell me if it have Chinese nationalist elements.I have read this kind of novel before where MC always put Chinese national interest first then he is own nation. like literally just populate half of his country population with Chinese people.

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Está decente, me recuerda a Shadow Slave, tanto en el mundo, las criaturas, niveles de poder de los humanos, etc. El desarrollo de personajes deja mucho que desear, pero no está en un nivel malo. Aparte de esto, siento que la historia avanza demasiado rápido y no hay momentos en los que puedas comprender la situación sin que esta cambie en menos de un segundo.

I rate this book a 5/10, it's not great neither is it bad. It's the same usual illegitimate daughter swapped at birth troupe with multiple great identities. One thing I think stands out thus far is the male lead, although he has the germophobia stuff, they didn't really describe him as the usual cold, brooding and handsome. He has some form of rationality ( level-headedness)  around him. He seems to have more brain than every other character