Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?

I really do like the novel just it is a bit lengthy, but there is room for improvement and the author also has great potential thank you author

This is a really good book for a start up, good work

What a nice story. I'm liking this book every chapter that passes. Good work Author

I love it please guys support me with those power stones to boost my writing activities

even if you don't like the beginning of the book, I recommend you to give it a chance, even though I have read more than 500 novels, I am a beginner in writing, but I think I am getting better as I write, I can write quite fluent texts and plots at the moment, I plan to write a big and deep universe instead of a shallow small world.

For now, I do like it. My friend is a good writer :)) It’s a taekook story. Who will not like them? 🥺

Even so, the book is new but as a writer you are doing great job👍 keep up the good work 💪 you will shine 😉

The writing is good, plot is kind of unique but character development is needed. The main story goes around Iori but still now she is playing the role of weak, inocent woman...

what a shitty novel this is..the plot hole are so wide.its more shitty than a typical Chinese urban novel

All the chapters are gone I restarted my phone several times checked in other devices got a whole new damn router and can’t find it where they went?

The picture seems quite epic. Let's see what the novel is like.