mutagenesis

An interesting piece with nice pace. I love it

just more garbage that they pack into every cliche novel...                                          .                    .        ...                    ...

No ads just stones what bs. I thinks this is just too greedy and I will stop reading as I cant pay per chapter. When will I hit 140 characters.

How to ruin a fanbase? Stop updating for months.

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This is genuinely quite good, the world is not super developed, but almost all of the characters have something interesting about them, this is not the kind of novel where you wont remember who a character is, no, you know exactly what type of person everyone is, their capabilities, their personality.the main character is not a core focus, a lot of events happen to other people, the main character is just there to be the game designer, and while plenty of time is dedicated to the office and dealing with employees, a large amount of the novel also cover the gameplay and interesting stories of the players, there is the hacker who went to jail but now works for the main character business company, or the rich young master who feels burdened by his responsibilities and used gaming as a way to relax, but through a random chance meeting with someone in an internet cafe,  he gained a good friend who is also talented at gaming and the two work together to make a group.there is plenty of potential which can be brought out, as long as this does not fall the classic pitfalls of china #1 everyone else bad and arrogant young masters/shallow villains.

Simply- humorous and witty with a regular game world, but expect laughs.The world is complex and is as you would expect of a game world, simple mechanics that work for any game novel, levels, monsters and pretty ladies 👀The characters seem fleshed out as can be in 20 chapters, its very interesting and the humour had me laughing. So just for that i would recommend reading itThe MC isnt a simp either which always helps

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