@Aechauhan, one thing I would like to mention, it's likely that this story is going to be viral, but you are capable enough to do so, for me, the story is going out well, and as Ms. Kannojia mentioned, English could be enhanced, and the story could be more lively, all the way it's good but still it can be more hooking than it currently is.

As a newbie BL reader, I picked this up coz it seemed enticing in conceptAnd it is enciting in practice too 😏. Developing on the current ML's would be nice and I love the crude humour mixed in with the spicy!!

When will next volume upload please teell the date ?

They're no enough chapter for me to provide a more constructive review but from what I have read, it has potential to be something great.The worldbuilding is top notch, the characters are alive and the pacing is quite good. This is definitely a worth to read if you like reading fantasy novels.Thank you so much for creating a wonderful story Author. Keep it up!I'll be wait for your future updates.

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Have you ever had high expectations and after reading a book had them exceeded? That's what just happened to me. Right from the first sentence, this book pulls you in and doesn't let go. Where should I start from? The main character?The author created a likeable MC that you can't help but root for. Kieran is the kind of person you'll want to have as a friend. Someone who embodies determination. It is said that evil thrives when good men do nothing. Kieran is one of those men who don't allow evil to thrive. A phrase that describes him can be found in game of thrones: "Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken."But the side characters also shine. Frank, Miss Jane, the Dean, the Phoenix, all of them come alive in their own way to add color to the story.One of the things I'd also praise is the worldbuilding. Instead of dumping everything down our throat, the author reveals it slowly, piece by piece in a way that pulls you in.While chapter 15 was initially jarring for introducing such advanced tech, the more you read, the more it strangely fits. Kudos to the author.However, it would be a terrible disservice to just speak about all the good parts and neglect the bad parts.The only problem I had is the writing quality. And no, the grammar isn't bad. The only problem is that a lot of words are repeated a lot and it stands out. But even with that problem, the books still shines.While I've only read 20 chapters and no one knows what direction this book will take, I can confidently say that I'll keep reading.Keep up the good work, author. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

This book is thrilling and spooky, and it will keep you on your toes. I like everything about it and I recommend it to everyone.

I FOUND A TREASURE 💎💎💎I got hook as early as 1st chapter!!! (Really!)Eloquently written, vivid and engaging yet not dragging descriptions for so long that eats up entire chapter (which is usually irksome) Not the usual cliche storyline that we always find here in webnovel. Character build up is solid. The originality is refreshing amongst the saturated volume of novels. I cried and laugh with the chapters like I'm part of the journey. This quality of writing is rare find. 🤍And for the author to be able to do this passion of writing amidst day job and reality is inspiring!I won't be surprised if this novel will shoot up to top rankings! Congratulations in advance! I finally found another beautiful novel after a long time. 🩷 Thank you!

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍

Hey everyone, I'm the author of Shadow Bug and I want to use the opportunity to thank everyone who read my work while it was serializing. It's going on Hiatus for no so I can work out the rest of the story.once again, thank you so much and I hope you'll still be here when Shadow Bug returns 🙏🏽

Just wanted to put this here as a disclaimer, that I'm writing this mainly for fun, but I still want to learn to be a better writer so feedback is appreciated!

Wow, I'm loving it so far, I'm not usually into these kind of novels but this one really got me hooked, added to library  will definitely be binge reading tonight 😅