SSS-Rank Passive Skill and Return

Raw title: 从契约精灵开始Status: 500 Chapters (Ongoing).......................................................................................................

I got to chapter 17, and will just say that I'm confused. I understand the general plot, but everything feels jumbled together with no proper flow. the relationship between MC and the succubus doesn't even make sense to me.Hopefully the book gets better, but as of now I rate it mid to low mid.

Raw title: 网游之神级机械猎人Status:  2069 Chapters (Completed)....................................................................Author: 逆袭的马里奥............................................................

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Mr and Mrs Smith vibes all over again...................................................................................................

It's such a great novel; feel in love with it. Hopefully you push thru and not drop this hidden gem...................................................................................................................................................

Not a bad start, but could use way less swearing. And what is with the looking to see if his dick is still there? Are you going to make the MC a pervert? Have to say that pervert's stopped being amusing several stories back.

I, Melon dao approves this scripture and decided to add it to my forbidden library of culture. This venerable is very pleased as you are doing a honorable job of teaching and spreading culture and hope you continue to this sacred quest.This scripture belong to the genre of game to reality and Mc will develop a invincible family with different kinds of waifus.Last but the least, This Scripture Has No yuri and Ntr!