The start of this novel is a clickbait, and it took a spinoff to let us know how it all started, and adding a mystery not revealing the one who mated with fl adds suspense to the story, over all, this novel is interesting till now and will post a follow up review after few more chapters

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Shameless author here, dropping a totally unbiased, 100% objective ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ review! Do I love this book? Absolutely. Am I biased? Probably. But hey, if you spot any typos, weird sentences, or anything that makes you go 'huh?', let me know so I can go back and fix it—because even perfection needs touch-ups! Also, if you’re enjoying the story, do me a favor and hit that add-to-library button like it owes you money. More collections = more motivation = faster chapters, and let’s be honest, we all want that. Alright, that’s enough shamelessness for now—carry on, dear reader!

I have read all the ch out so far. It is a fun read, and I enjoyed it other than the grammar that can be improved. There is not much to say, but I will be looking forward to the next ch good job Author keep up the good work and finish this book, anyway keep this story going

I just finished reading it, and I'm genuinely captivated by the storyline. The twists and developments have piqued my curiosity, and I find myself eagerly anticipating how everything will unfold. I'm really looking forward to the upcoming updates

It is a wonderful and addictive story.

It's a lovely book, and I hope to see more chapters, I like how the characters aren't too all that serious, and I love the fact that the plot isn't mainly focused on the villain, it is precisely on the female lead, or though, I'm not getting word of the male lead much, and I feel the book is mainly on Adria, it would be nice if you showed more of Dakota☺️

As a fellow writer I highly recommend this novel 👌 The premise is really different and intriguing. The MC is just such a fun vibe, keep it up author!

It's one of the best Yuri novels you will find in this corner of the net, you should give it a try!

As a good come on start, the idea and the main character are very good, the comedy is fine,the time of downloading the chapters is wonderful, only the problem of clerical errors but on the whole the narration is beautiful.

Chapters 71 to 79 are repeats of chapters 64 to 68. I do like the story & the characters, BUT I absolutely don't like re-reading previously posted chapters ... it's a huge turn off for me! Please find a way to delete the chapters that are repeats

The whole book is strange to me. Many things are repeated, which I think is not a coincidence. There are plenty of logical errors. The fights are very boring and easily confuse you. The world building is good and so is the power system. I like the overpowered main character. But basically because there are too many  the book is flawed and the author shamelessly dares to ask for money for it, it is completely unreadable to me.