I became transcendent

this book is amazing

It's a pretty good novel. I specially like the fact that main characters powers is related to eyes which is pretty unique since MC with powers dedicated to eyes only is very rare and most of them are not well made. If there is one thing I am not satisfied with that would be the fact that he is naive and why the hell is he so nice with Greg's parents why did he cried so easily.I mean it makes no sense that he is a cry baby when he lived pretty much all his life in pain and agony. Author I think it would be good if MC is somewhat like the main character of "LUCIFERS DESENDENT". Keep up the good work. Other than MC being naive I like everything else.

It starts off with an interesting premise and then turns into nothing but clichés.Fat best friend, top tier treasures hidden in cheap markets, cold girl who suddenly likes the protagonist after losing to him, poor parents who suddenly turn out to have hidden identities in the capitol, great treasures fighting for the chance to be picked up by him but turns out useless looking treasure was the strongest one there was, kills arrogant noble that turns out had a secret ability to tell his family about his killer, in a team tournament but doesn’t show up till team is almost defeated, plus many more.It’s as if the author has a madlibs of a generic novel and changed the names and abilities a little.Translation is also not great.  Names suddenly change all the time, measurements are all over the place(100 meters becomes 100 miles and then 100 kilometers or currency is in yuan or crystals or dollars)It’s a real shame that this novel couldn’t have been better.

Boring just boring im suprised that some people actually like this thing(Yes a thing i can't even call it a novel)it's a typical wish fulfilment MC i got bored so fast reading this i can't even past chapter 09

20 chapters in and I'm hooked. I find it interesting enough to give it a bit of my attention. Don't know how it'll turn out in the future chapters, but I hope it doesn't disappoint...

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This is the shameless author review I saw everyone doing 😅I don't really have anything to say other than I hope you guys enjoy reading this

A fun read, grammar is also good. The story ia the typical villain stealing luck cliche. Still, a good Story to pass time.