It's not a bad plot. Not consistent in terms of plot, especially when transitioning every chapter. Also, the whole Man City plot is straight-up dumb. Instead of selling his stock, he kept it so he could be a beta cuck who get his opinion rejected. Like seriously dumb. Mc acts like he wanna buy a club but can't due to his sellable stock at Man City. Easy solution, sell it, too bad Mc and author give dumb excuses to not sell the stock. I get Mc not buying Watford, but Mc not buying Man U is just dumb especially since he knew when Man U was brought. That was just some of the issues.

I really love your work ..I have been so bumped lately, and your work really helped me relax I can't wait for the next chapter

The idea is very good and somewhat new I hope that this novel will become famous because it deserves that

I am captivated by your ability to create characters that feel alive . This is a must read novel waiting for the more chapters ♥️♥️

Bro this novel is crazy good and the characters here are not to overpowered and not to weak. Each character is amazing in their own way and the twists and turns  are mind-blowing. I can’t wait to read chapter 11

5/5 Stars Seems good so far. But what is this M***a? Is it Mecha? Is there gonna be kingdom-building? How many girls will there be in the Harem? Will the Harem be huge? Like 30 girls? Or is it gonna be small lie no more than 6 or 7. I personally want it to be big. Is he gonna have children? If so how many?               

Well your novel only has 20 chapters so can't reall judge how it  will turn out, but I'm liking it as of now, I particularly liked that grim reaper and her quirky character ,in the end I will only say keep going.

I think the story has potential the wold is impressive as much as the first chapter tells us about the world I would like the writer to upload chapters quickly so I can get to know how it goes. The thing is I can't be sure just by reading the first chapter

Love the story!! Can’t wait to read more!!

I like the first few chapters, first chapter gave the vibe on how the battles will be, and the Crab thingy was 'out of the box'.Definitely will continue reading the next chapters!

mc is only gonna achieves anything cause he is the mc.bloody idiots we get as mcs this guy is high tier stupid.apart from that seems good

ntr lets goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo