A great novel, with well-executed dialogues. The description is decent but could use some development. Overall, the novel is excellent.

i really want to know have you get a contract and how ?i hope to help me, I really tired .

story development can be better, can have more depth in character building and it's  makes better quality story.

I enjoyed it and feel the emotion from each character. I understand their emotions and the way it’s going it feels like there’s going to be development. I would like more design for the character and a little bit more description for the environment.

Very good for 12 chapters, I hope you complete at the same level♥️

It has mention of an incest waifu? Instant 10/10. GOTY. 10/10. It’s officially the best book ever. Everyone else might as well stop competing.

Current chapter-4I guess this is the first review because this is an entirely new novel, somewhere buried under other hundreds of thousands web novels but I believe that this will not be the case because I can see a lot of potential in this novel if done correctly!-----------------------------------------------------------------------Thought the writing is very good---Excellent, the story development and world background is not clear. But what can I expect from a novel with only 4 chapters.In first chapter I was hooked with the story, and so for other chapters.The concept of character integration seems promising but the trope of transmigrating to main character's body from a story, who couldn't concur the world and the MC is challenged to concur the world is cliche. To say it--I have read it in a Po**hwa.🤣🤣😅 Stuck in academy's eroge or something.Though, it wuld be best if you could keep consistency.👍👍👍

I'm angry at myself for having read the whole thing, now I don't know what to do, I can't wait to find out more, the story is intriguing ! Can't wait for the new chapters !

Ok, Rhett is the overall MC. The storyline has been great so far, except for minor typos. I like the idea of killing the ice dragon and becoming the king of the dragon slayers. Those dragon slayers living in a trash can was really funny. Good writing author

This novel captivated my heart.Iam expecting more twist in the story...love it...

Good Luck with the story. hope it does good

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