The_Scientist's "The Supreme Taming System"

Hello everyone! I hope you may give Blood Warlock a chance, as you will undoubtedly like it, I can vouch for that!Those who already knows me from my other novel know that everything I write has a deep meaning in it, so I can assure 0 plot holes.Without more to say, let's enjoy this story together!

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The author did a great job with the synopsis.U feel the mystery, the tension in this book. This is one of those books that drags you in and makes you read every nail biting moment until you finished it. However, i have a few concerns. Why is the 15th chapter Free and 14th one locked? I felt Dan is more like a teenager with father issues than a grownup man with the way his monologues carry out. I feel for him, i really do. What with him writIng poems and brooding. He is alone and lonely. I get it. But... according to the author he must be in his twenties (i deduced that from lily’s age). And he is way too sensitive for a guy in his twenties. I dont know... If it was a female Instead of a Male lead, I could understand the inner monolgue. Or it was me i guess. i Lean towards more stronger male lead. Or maybe the author is trying to show how Dan grows in His character, especially by showing from where he started. Other than that, the author did a splendid job of creating each scene. skillfully handled world-Building.

I just finished reading all 8 available chapters today. NGL, it was exceptional. The story development and world background is slowly building up okay. IDK if the setting is the same Earth as ours, but whatever it is, it's being introduce nicely. Character design is great for the characters introduced so far. The premise of the story is somewhat unique for this common 'Tower, Dungeons, Heroes' kind of plot because it's not only the MC that went into reincarnation but the main antagonist of this story also, plus the idea of there being more is really intriguing for me. Lastly, the potential of this novel for future development is quite huge (in my opinion only. Don't expect a lot from this review, do your own observation). As long as the author do it right, then this could end up becoming a renowned story that can separate itself from rest of its kind... or become trash. I wish you the best.

Overall pretty good. Writing quality was okay; punctuation could use a little work as well as capitalization. I would mainly use more commas to separate phrases. The author has created a vivid and interesting MC, and the story has a cool premise. Keep writing author! Looking forward to seeing you and the story grow!

Am goin' to drop this book and all the books from this account because I can't log into this account anymore. Sorry for the inconvinience. The content (chapters) if this book and all the books written using this accoubt will be transfered to my new account Queen_ella. Thank you for your understanding and once again, sorry for the inconvinience.