I like how the author's narrative going from 3rd pov to the rest. for now there is only one chapter but I'll be waiting for more. 😁

I enjoyed your story writing. I started reading and ended up reading until the last chapter! I'm waiting for the next chapters. I like the MC's timely sense of humor and the weird system calling weak chicken! Good job, by the way!

Enough for the moment, not disgusting to read. rather intuitive. why not ? I will try to continue

Well balanced good story with a pretty cool concept and a what seems to be a great cast so far, plot seems good so far and hopefully will continue to be. A little more focus on world building and this would be awesome but regardless, keep up the good work.

This is evidently a new writer, but the enthusiasm shown in this work is remarkabe. Each chapter is meant to capture the readers attention. Unlike other books i have read this one seeems to capture the normalcy of the human mind and relate on a personal level.

solid reincarnation plot with cool, interesting idea and a fresh premise. waiting for a deeper character development and more exploration to the new world😌

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This has pontential but, I was wondering how well it would fare against the “Sweet Liberty” from the Warhammer40k fanfic “The Primarch of liberty”

This story is a true piece of work from the sypnosis to the story it's really amazing the author did a great job so guys I recommend this book you can add it to your collections

Your writing felt so magical from the beginning. I got hooked from the first chapter itself. I read as if the scenes played before my eyes. Keep updating!

Shameless Author Review: I love doing these kinds of stories. It's like a horror movie where you watch a character and try to immerse yourself in their sorry situation, except it's a person from the real world in the world of naruto. It's a great story and I can't wait to finish it!!!!

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