Hope In Mind

I fall for this novel, how you potray the lead male's character mesmerized me. I'ld love your story so far. More chapters, please! :)

An OP MC that occasionally misses some swing and occasionally doesn’t notice someone spying on him even though he has thousand perhaps millions or billions years of experience. Who knows how long the strongest cultivator can live. He also has a mother complex, although not seeing the other as a potential wife, like most MC’s that don’t have an irreconcilable feud with their family.

bro, you have a good story. its nice to see a new novelist rise up to shine, i will try to support you by reading and appreciate your worksthe grammar was horrible at early but its getting better and better later on, it's show how hard you work. we are really thankful for that.but you see, the problem is every new reader always start from beginning, and it will really help yourself if you revise you early work. I'm sure it will encourage many new reader.i thank you for your time and effort, i wish you goodluck

note- I am a big amateur when it comes to writing reviews.but I will still give it a try.1. My Favorite part of this novel was the writing quality. I think that the author put a fair amount of work pleasing the readers with his writing capabilities which he absolutely did.2. As you all may know, the story revolves around a protagonist who got transmigrated into a game that he used to play. and the bad news is that he got put into the body of a person who got NTRed which explains the title. The story revolves a lot about fighting and a lot of cuckolding (not the mc whos doing the cuckolding because he is actually the one getting cucked but ofc its part of the development of the story).one of the key factors on why the novel got such a bad rating is because of how inconsistent the updates and development were. I can clearly understand that some people are just getting mad because of how slow the story is, and that is where the inconsistency comes into role. imo, if you are going to try writing a slow-paced story, I would recommend uploading more chapters per week. 1 chapter per week is not really ideal if you want your story to be highly rated and so on. It may be because the author has some work to do irl and because it is only a hobby but it may have been a bit better to upload a bit more than once per week. (for example villain cultivator, endless path infinite cosmos etc)I actually got a bit confused about the choices of the protagonist considering that he has played the game before and why he did not make use of his knowledge. I mean, if he did not even have knowledge about the game why would we readers even need the 'useless' information? I mean should he not have a bit of an advantage so that he does not start from "scratch"?I wont really pick on the protagonists development because I actually considered the amount of chapters it has unlike those people complaining about why the protagonist is such a wuss and so on.overall it is decent and it couldve had a better, overall "look" to it if it was less slow paced but thumbsup for the author.

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The synopsis is quite wrong, never mention the system and even got the talent grade wrong 😤

The author is a superb narrator that writes like a seasoned expert. The concept is original and compelling as well as the foreshadowing and the way the author paints the scene. There is no purple prose. nor is the author bland. The author isn't overly-descriptive, but they describe things from the main character's standpoint. I actually love this hidden gem and I know it will go far.

A beautiful and Interesting read indeed. i am liking he way story is in process .Just hop in u won't drop the book halfway.Please give us more chapters