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Jacky0211
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ntww12
Jacky0211 rated it The Heart of Zaun
May 14,2025
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Solid story so far, a few laughs, and great editing. I would recommend giving this one a shot. No idea of what kind of adventure we'll get in the long run, but I think we'll have an enjoyable time getting there. I don't know if it will end up in your library, but I know it's in mine.
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Absolutely suspenseful storyline. It makes you feel curious about the next chapter creating an urge to read more. I love this. One of the best light novels i have ever read. props to the creator.
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Jacky0211 rated it A Love Unmasked
May 13,2025
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Absolutely loved it! Sollivan is such a patient and well-crafted protagonist, with promising potential for story development. I felt the story is bit draggy at first but the plot picked up pace and blended beautifully. Do consider keeping the chapters a bit shorter to maintain momentum.Keep going🥰
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Jacky0211 rated it The Secret Truth
May 13,2025
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please update a new chapter soon it's already 4 days
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This is an amazing novel, surely this will capture our attention
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Hey guys, I am the author of... Harem, Dragons, and Deities, or HDXD lol. Originally, I used to write fanfic, but now I want to take my shot at my own original work, while adding my own layer of creativity to clichés.Well, I love good romance, just as I love good action and fantasy. If you like kingdom building mixed with a supernatural fantasy world with supernatural elements, this is for you. But that aside, please leave a review to support the book and drop your power stones. Feedback for reviews would be nice.
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Jacky0211 rated it Treeborn
May 13,2025
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An interesting book. Also amusing at times. Really funny. The only problem I have is that the author has only updated one chapter.        HEAR ME AUTHOR, I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!😅
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Jacky0211 rated it The Escapade system
May 12,2025
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This novel is nothing new, there are many of this type now... The MC transmigrates into the body of an extra hated by the family and must deal with all the difficulties that come with it. The period in which this "abuse" occurs is not long (35 chapters more or less) and not too hard so it is easily overcome... The quality of writing is simple but effective and the characters, despite not having who knows what past, are well characterized and appear "alive". This means that if the novel had no defects or at least they were few, reading would be pleasant and captivating for the most part but unfortunately this is not the case and most of the time the reader is left wondering: why? I don't want to touch on the subject of revenge or how or with whom he will want to take it since it is still in progress and I won't even comment on the dense isekai protagonist trait that he has even after being stabbed in the back (I had taken some privileged chapters to see the reaction at least to that: disappointment) ... However the biggest problem of the novel is the MC chained by having to necessarily be on par with the others since he never uses his brain or his power in order not to make him OP...Let me explain:-The MC from the first to the last fight practically uses only the sword ... is he sword god ? No and he is not even talented. His bloodline would allow him to create an ideal "character" by sacrificing traits of his ego and in addition he would become stronger at a disproportionate rate ... Does he do it? Only once in a desperate situation and sacrificing the first things that came to mind ... It would be enough to sit down and understand everything he can sacrifice without substantially affecting his person to make himself stronger but in 8 years he hasn't done it, ever ;-His bloodline always allows him to learn the skills of the monsters he kills but even after 2 years of C-rank portals he doesn't learn any of them or at least he doesn't use them as if this trait (OP) was forgotten;-He having knowledge of the novel could learn and use the darkness element but in 8 years it is not even mentioned after introducing it at the beginning as a way to become stronger quickly;-His magic never used and we don't even know how many and which affinities he has unlocked since he should have had as many as possible to absorb monsters of different elements;-Finally his summoning ability that is not used when he could only attribute it to his bloodline ...The exam chapters are damn frustrating to read... seeing a potentially OP MC having to fight because he doesn't use any of his traits and in the end even betrayed without reaction... All this leaves only a bitter taste, what a shame.
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You are very good and you write very well! Everything I have read written by you is ✨✨✨✨✨ Good luck, man, and I hope you become a famous writer, successful as you deserve, internationally!🙌
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There is nothing here, but feel free to ask any questions...
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Jacky0211 rated it Mystics Returned
May 12,2025
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One of the best novels I have ever read,keep it up 😌.We need more of thsi.Thank you very much,really appreciate it.You have done a great job 👏,if you keep am thsi good work.I assure you you’re on the right path to success
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Jacky0211 rated it GoT Lord Frost
May 12,2025
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The story itself isn't bad but there seems to be a lot of forced interactions with the different characters that makes the story feel rigid. The MC "forgetting" that people are around when using his "secret" abilities is another problem with the story. Its really unfortunate because it kept me from truly getting attached to any characters since all interactions seemed out of place. An easy example is Connor the person he met during a raid that he "accidentally" showed his repair function to. Somehow Connor didn't even react and MC trusted that he wouldn't reveal his secrets and continued to reveal more of what he could do. The way he reacts to things just doesn't make much sense and it's rough having a dumb MC sometimes. There are also some inconsistencies early on with levels and the stats he gets per level but thats not as important if youre not looking to immerse yourself in the story. I will continue to read the story but as of now these are some pretty bad flaws.
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