A Love Unmasked

great stories t but there are some typos bit still the content was great

Although I love the concept ,the characterisation and world building is atrocious . Most characters aren't even 2 dimensional, dialogues are horrendous and shows how naive and childish the MC and/or author is. It is astonishing to see the writing quality is the best part of the story.

The idea of the story is great and all, but the 4 chapters doesn't work and it's kind of weird. You just get straight into the story about death and there isn't much world building or MC character background (maybe present in later chapters). Four chapters isn't enough to give readers a background of the story and garner interest. All four chapters are just depicting the execution a wealthy scum who escaped from the law. I have to say this again, kind of weird. The impression given was that the rest of the story was just going to be like this, execution scenes. Not to be offensive, but it's kind of sick, honestly, not very appetizing or happy to read about.I don't recommend people to read this story.(This review is based off of the first four chapters given)

so I'm not much of a reviewer I've maybe done 2 other reviews, I don't got much to say it's great so far the best story I have found in the cultivation genre and almost the best I've found in general. I like this one a lot more though   I've decided to dedicate my power stones  to this and so should you it's worth it, so much so that I doubt you can find a proper reason not to.

Well, it seem like this story is not picked. tath susck, it would have been nice to have a game story where the main character isn't some super powerful DPS or tank.

Well, i will say this story is a good one , honestly i thought this wi be boring, because the typical story with strong mc from start is good only at start but wil be bad later. For now let say that this story have a good start and if the author can hold this to the end, this will be a great novel

I wanted to write a fun, cultivation world novel while using the usual cliches and tropes of the genre in my own way. This is not your typical cultivation novel, and I hope you enjoy this.This novel is based on the fun adventures of a reborn disciple from Earth and Immortal Master who lacks social skills.Planning to update 1/day. I want to write slightly long chapters and hence it's hard for multiple releases. I am thinking of breaking down long chapters to 2 for the first week.I know I am not great at writing, and I forget even the basic grammar rules. But I really want to tell stories.So if you find errors or have suggestions, please feel free to comment.This is my entry for WPC #108.I do realize the works that I am a horrible editor of my own work. So, if I end up missing anything, I will try to go back and edit those past chapters after a certain number of chapters get released.Looking forward to building this novel with you all and learning from it.Still why I give this a 5* rating? Because I am shameless and this is my own novel xd.

I am having a great interest in reading this book as its one of the interesting book starting is quite interesting and suspending also how they did not find out about their twins