if you drop this then you are............🌈

You've got both nerve and potential! Keep on writing¡ and this work can serve as your ♤ Ace! Unlike others,I don't have much to say because I'm satisfied!

Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?

good writing style, interesting characters ,keep it up ,

The novel's content is very exciting.Exciting and thrilling, very captivating.

Your book is admirable, keep on the good work 😀

I love how you start the chapter, but I have one suggestion if you don't mind. Don't upload chapters too quickly. I don't know—that's your choice, but from my point of view, if you want to upload frequently, then daily or 12 chapters per week is enough.Keep it up!

I hate the ML. I think there should be a second ML that better

okay...a lot of unexpected events right there. who would have thought that he actually recognised her? and his vows? seriously? that was really hilarious

I love the main character shippings!The subtle things especially with Riverus and Cheska!Still not sure about Kayer and Amaranthe since he's still grieving. but I feel like the others can already sense something about her, right? hihi

You took good care of making the script catchy since the beginning. That gave me wanna read the next chapters. I follow the adventures of Eram with pleasure. Just make sure you correct all the typos in the early chapters. Take your time and reread your work prior to publishing it. I left a lot of comments. Don't hesitate to reach out to me, I'm happy to exchange.

please read and enjoy my book guys, and don't forget to please rate and send those fire tokens, comment on the book and in the chapters, like and follow for more, and share your ideas with me, I'd love to steal your ideas to make this book even better than it already is. Forgive me, but this ann11/10 ❤ Your humble deity is at your service