Okay, I just finished going through the chapters, and I’ve got to say. I’m really intrigued. There’s something about the way the story mixes normal school life with this weird, almost eerie atmosphere that kept me reading. The characters, especially Kama and his brother Ariz, feel super real. Their back-and-forth was funny at times, but also kind of emotional in a quiet way. You can tell there’s history between them, and that made me care about them more than I expected.But I gotta be honest... the chapters are long. Like, really long. I caught myself scrolling and scrolling, wondering when a scene would end. Don’t get me wrong, the writing is detailed and flows well, but I think it would help a lot if the chapters were broken into smaller parts. Not because the content is bad but because it’s a lot to take in all at once. Shorter chapters would make the pacing feel tighter and give each scene more punch.Also, there are some moments where things get a bit repetitive—like a character’s thoughts or reactions looping in similar ways—but that’s nothing a bit of trimming wouldn’t fix.Overall, though, I’m hooked. The slow reveal of the school’s weird vibe, the strange behavior of the teachers, and how Kama is just trying to stay low-key while getting pulled into something bigger? I’m totally here for it. Just… maybe give us a breather between the scenes next time 😅

Does it have a romance element or a harem?

Alright so I'll be honest this is a slow burn novel if you can't stand slow burns please do not read this I don't want to waste your time with a type of novel you dislike......If you have come all the way down here to know more all I can say is every character from everything I have posted is in the novel one way or another read chapter 0 if you are a lore person it will make sense later oh and also don't worry I won't drop or cut this short I have about 100 draft chapters which will only go over arc 1 and also also I do plan on implementing elements from other author's works you might realize and yes I do give full credit to them for coming up with those cool ideas.

Your writing is quite neat, but it can still be improved, oh yes, the storyline is also quite intriguing, I will wait for the next chapters, keep fighting!

It has a good flavour and I love the story.  I highly recommend this book to fantasy readers and fans.  It a book worth trial. I crazy about it.

haven't read it yet but love the description so saved it for now ...just leaving my review for the author

I'm a little irritated that I have to work, but I'll be adding this to the collection! You should do the same. Great story!

Trust, your story is just nice. I don't have much to say but I feel like Jonah could have actually succeeded without having to sacrifice himself. I just hope he somehow comes back later on.Asides that, the story is too good to be fiction even 😂

good story worthy of giving try and to add on collection.

Very interesting CEO novel to read, I hope the author keeps continued updates. A good novel overall.

please update or are you dropping this book

A must read novel !!💗I Finished reading all the chapters available, and I can’t wait to read what happens next !