Good pacing, great world building, grammar its smooth but slight tweaks then it all will be polished. Punctuations and paragraph spacing were good but their are some parts that needed to fixed and adjust but it doesn't mean the story is bad. It was good, and I highly recommended it, 😊it has a potential to be contracted as it has a unique sense, and the author ideas was very refreshing in a sense that you could really relate to. Regarding the character not sure yet, as of now I only read few chapters, I still need to read further to see and understand the character deeply. Overall great work, to more ink!

It was good, like good I've seen some that are like this but I think that this is actually a good one, I appreciate the writer of this novel a lot

please never drop this its one of the most original and interesting football novels on this site

I will read more chapters first, but from the prologue it is quite interesting according to the genre that I like. I look forward to the next chapter 😊

What a nice story. I'm liking this book every chapter that passes. Good work Author

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

First Impression Review :I only read 10 chapters, I know. but...Although the world development and other staff are good, there are some incoherency with character's characteristics, like, some minutes ago Misty thinks of MC as a kid, but the next moment out of nowhere she starts feeling lovey-dovey towards MC like a lover.And this is the reason that made me lose my interest in this novel.I think, at least for Starting, "Bad Luck System" was better than this novel, although that novel was not perfect, i wanted more chapters of that novel.

Interesting Cheat ✅️ Well written Characters ✅️ World Building right ✅️ Cliff hangers ✅️Story ✅️ Updates ✅️ ✅️ ✅️

This book has a wonderful World building clench that just hooks you right into it. My favorite character—Ara. Highly recommended.

I start to read it and it is good . but i think it will need to more time .

😂 😂 😂It's my first book still rusty, but don't sleep on it, cause it's one interesting book

Hi. Author here. I just want to mark my progress so far.