honestly ,the prologue is good and it detailed the mc emotions .the following chapters also has great  grammars, but that's also where the flaw is,the descriptions takes up most of the chapter and give little space for the main elements , but I believe you know what you want to portray,or maybe it's because I like fast paced novels.it's great anyways and has chance for improvement .keep it up 💪

Loved how Oliver and Li Mao romance is growing stronger. It is a really catchy story, with great characters development and beautiful scenarios combining ancient but at the same time modern China.

Good plot and world background , unique writing style , i'm waiting for more chapters  keep it up

on the heavens this book is flames like the intro and let's not only dive in the characters, your writing style also reminds me of Classroom of the elite lightnovel...keep it up man

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great to see a friend creating a universe! I can't wait for the next chapters. I worked with him and never imagined that he would be a literary genius.

Great story, but I need more chapters, urgently.  Great story, but I need more chapters, urgently.Great story, but I need more chapters, urgently.

I love the story so far, the pacing and world building is great but I'm begging you to please use dialog and conversation between characters more often to explain the world and also to develop the characters. Thanks you for the story so far I'm excited to see where it goes. (also please please keep the main characters relationship monogamous, there's plenty of harem stuff out there and I appreciate the relationship they have)

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

The strory was actually good ngl, the writing, the way the characters are described are all great. The writing style is impressive, and the characters feel real. The story's engaging, with well-crafted characters and vivid descriptions. However, it sometimes lacks depth in plot and pacing could be tighter.

Ask me anything in this review ...........

Awesome go give it a try, you will love it!!!!