Our hearts became one

Surprisingly I liked this.(At chapter 40)The main character actually has some characteristics to him, as characters should, unlike let’s say the third ‘I get 10,000 fold return from my disciples’ ripoff that I have been reading recently.The story background though is basically the same as the others: generic with small differences from the others. (So far atleast)No cringe worthy face slapping.Just, I like it. Give it a try.

it started good but it became embarrassingly bad

Hearing this Marie paled she was trembling, Jazz was expecting this but even he was depressed.  One after another wrong things are happening looklike my luck has run out.

Hopefully.

Chacha:"ok aku otw"

The Latrell twins said nothing in reply. They were unsure whether knowing more would be good for them. Knowledge could prove to be dangerous. This was evident in the successive murders of high-rank mechanics.

It was soft and Aslan thought to himself, "Wow this truly is an enchanted peach from the gardens of the Jade Emperor"

And in spite of the fact that their recent scare happened a little more than two hours ago, the tale they spun was filled with exaggeration.