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Lonely_Art
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Hehe, harem and romance, I love it Especially spice scenes. Guys read it definitely. Very good book and scenes.Especially mature scenes.
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The characters have depth, something I didn't think I'd find in a harem focused story, the writing quality is superb too!So far, the story is progressing very well, not too fast, not too slow, just enough to tease you to read more chapters.Really recommend.
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This story definitely has some potential.You should make the world building more mysterious and don't info dump. The world should unravel slowly
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A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work—though there is still room for improvement
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Noice book :D
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Amazing and interesting highly recommend
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if you shut your brain off it'll be a good story but when you notice how some of this stuff makes zero sense it jus kills your mood. 1. the power scaling is legit horrible like he didnt even think anything out. for some strange reason they are B ranks and in additon to that B ranks in this novel are like S ranks in others also this ranking system goes into like XX which isnt bad but the only reason they go that far is because the author is adamant about having B rank charachters also the mc reaches the novel mc's level reltivley quick and gets a affinity really quick as well and also has two systems that say the same thing so why cant he just have had his orignal system merge with the new system? 2. For some strange reason they fight proffesers which wouldnt be bad but the author uses this chance to introduce other charachters. Its not bad to use cliches cus theres a reason they use them. For example the entrence exam cliche " First Years do tests, fight each other or fight second years that are lower ranking" because obviously this academy wants to see how they do to the lower ranking former first years why would they if the proffesers are XX rank they wouldnt need to fight the students themselves to see how good they are. 3. He introduces so much charachters so quick and doesnt really even introudce someone fully first he jus dashes and goes to the next person.4. He jus gets power ups for no reason???? He gets the cliche no emotion skill fine, but also is out cold for a week where apperntly no one inclduing his very loving mother doesnt contact him at all?? they are super super rich so why doesnt she have somsone watching him why would this rich family leave their son alone and with no body guards it makes no sense. Also has the cliche average mc but his whole family is very attractive so how is he the only average one. I'll keep reading but i doubt ill spend money on this i personally think the author should rewrite this novel and fix the pwer scaling and some of the plot holes as well
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I'm excited to see how the author develops the characters throughout the story. Also, I'm intrigued by the author's use of language and storytelling techniques.
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The book is really entertaining! The main character seems to have some kind of hidden trauma haunting him, which really adds spice to the story!
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Idea and the premise is good, everything else is just bad. Multiple cliches and commonly used tropes. Subpar English with unnatural sentences.
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I'm really enjoying this book! there are so many turns that I can't put it down!
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I really enjoy this and think it will be peak btw you mixed up chapters 38 and 39
ROMANCE ON SET