Turning Chapter 299 Discussion

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  • #1
It's such a beautiful story, I just I can't you know? The slow burn sensation of two main character developing a feelings for each other. How warm every step of their relationship is feeling for me as a reader. I highly recommend it. Two new characters per day. ML is a huge green flag, MC is a slowpoke, but still not denying his own feeling. The beautiful relationship development. Muah đź’‹ thank you
 
  • #2
A solid effort. There are some grammatical errors and lose plot threads. The story is engaging but the main female character is a bit of a dormat. The author didn't give a solid resolution to a couple of loose threads at the end. Which leaves the reader feeling unsatisfied. The ending felt rushed.
 
  • #5
I can’t put this book down! Absolutely amazing! This author is a fabulous story teller.
 
  • #7
Unfortunately, while this book had so much promise, it utterly failed in its execution. There were problems from the beginning, and I believe that the idea was good. I would NOT suggest this book to anyone until the author decides to edit and fix major plot holes and character issues.
 
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