This is what I think so far:1.Anyways the novel is some peak lvl compared to the usual novels u find on wn these days .2.There's no harem in it so a plus point.3.The MC is sensible enough and not like your average beta and brain-dead MCs.4. The characters are good so far, all are likeable.

Frankly, this is one of the best novel I have ever read it contains everything I ever would have wanted in a novel ...it's very nice . Good work  dmar_shal.

2 questions. Will this stay free? Is it Twincest?

Hi, Author here! (And shamelessly giving my novel 5 stars :,) )If you're interested in seeing a story with a somewhat similar set-up to Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, but in a more fantasy setting? Well, Fanfic Isekai is the novel for you!While writing this, I hope to include:- An MC that has knowledge of how the story plays out, but is otherwise weak at first and is dragged along by the plot- By the end, he'll be the one changing the story himself- Characters he created, from villains to side characters, will develop into their own people, past even what he sees them as (just characters in a book)- A diverse and interesting cast/setting/lore with twists and turns in the plotIf this intrigues you, give the novel a try! Please treat this review as a Q/A section and I'll try my best to answer your questions.Thank you.

Hi author I think the novel is good but not my type and here are some suggestions or ideas for a new novel

waiting for the intriguing part so far I love it💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Reading and fell in love with the characters, especially the MC -Terumi Kuro, he's quirky and funny, tsundere (just a cutesy bit). This is heavily light novel prose, which is quite a fresh in Webnovel demographic in general. The author went to quite a great length with the character interactions, which I pretty much enjoyed. The dialog and joke came so naturally. I felt like they were really alive, even sentient, Hehe.For those they loved the action/magic, reading till chapter 5! This is where those began to shine. And then stories are getting more intense and ultimately more FUN! Please give it a read if you love slice-of-life, slow burn, emotional depth, and MC driven plotline!

Lots of inconsistency. ML can’t find his mate in a closed off room thinking she was just hiding. He’s an Alpha for pete’s sake. Even their son can find her Mom leaving from the hospital so he had to run to where her scent leads him. There was also the scene where FL asked her son in a whisper to not call her Mom while ML is just at the back of her. An Alpha should have a heightened hearing. What is this?

I love this  book ,pls continue , please

What can I say, he knows the secret to surpass Lv.100 😉 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

The few chapters at the start are quite slow-paced, but after that, the fun of the story begins. Also, I like to applaud the author for using first-person POV in writing the story. It really highlights the MC's personality.

This novel is amazing, Don't let the opportunity to read it pass you by.